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fallen angels

fallen angels
casualties of sin
in darkness lay

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  1. Date: 1/21/2011 6:19:00 PM
    Yes excellent job, Deb, a third I believe. Agape, Moses

  1. Date: 1/21/2011 6:18:00 PM
    For a guy who ain't religious, I love writing and reading about angels. It's the Dark Side in me. Koolio Senryu Deb...:)

  1. Date: 1/21/2011 3:41:00 PM
    Quite a vivid image of the fallen angels you have painted, Deb. Excellent work with the senryu form as well as the imagery. Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 1/21/2011 9:36:00 AM
    A very descriptive senryu. Good work. I love it!!! Very descriptive! Christine

  1. Date: 1/21/2011 9:18:00 AM
    This is very good, Deb. They are indeed casualties of sin!

  1. Date: 1/21/2011 8:52:00 AM
    The weekend is upon us once again and I hope yours is wonderful and that you might find the inspiration to keep writing your excellent poetry. It was a pleasure to read your poetry this morning Deb. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 1/21/2011 8:25:00 AM
    A very descriptive senryu. Good work.

  1. Date: 1/21/2011 6:54:00 AM
    Intellectual write on the fallen angels with apt images, deb