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Doggie devotion

grateful for rescuing me
your love for my family
thank you for your bravery
let me lick your wounds

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  1. Date: 1/21/2011 6:29:00 AM

    Oh. Well done, well done. I am amazed at how you captured the photo posted in this contest so perfectly, with so few words, so very well written. Excellent. Love, Deb

  1. Date: 1/20/2011 2:02:00 PM

    Hello again Eiken, What a wonderful poem for the contest. So full of love and loyalty ...... As Always, Shar

  1. Date: 1/20/2011 11:20:00 AM

    In the photo it DOES look like the dog is trying to lick the firefighter's burn wounds, Eiken. Some of us dragged on and on with our interpretations of the photo, but you said sooo much in just four lines. Wishing you success in the contest! Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 1/20/2011 8:53:00 AM

    I enjoyed reading your excellent poetry this morning Eiken. Wishing you a wonderful day. The best to you in Joyce's contest. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 1/20/2011 6:56:00 AM

    Love the last line which complement the rest of the poem, good luck in the contest. Harry

  1. Date: 1/20/2011 5:23:00 AM

    This is a beauitiful entry for Joyce's contest Eiken... Good luck to you with this gem, love Wilma