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Father

My eyes close tight, as they prep you for surgery...
Tears fall down my face and I began to feel weary...
 
I prayed to the Father, that your heart will pull through...
To beat once again, when the last machine releases you.
 
As an old chapter is closed up, a new heart begins another...
I know you will not give up, I have always known you as a fighter...
 
Day after day, you’re getting stronger, as the week comes to a draw.
I bowed to my knees, giving thanks to the Great Physician; the healer of all.

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  1. Date: 4/15/2011 12:24:00 PM
    that is beautiful.I see myself drawn to your poetry.Keep it up.You have a beautiful soul.

  1. Date: 1/20/2011 8:18:00 PM
    Your work conveys decent descriptiveness in its simple and easy to read wording.

  1. Date: 1/20/2011 4:13:00 PM
    I just love that last line, comparing the healer of all to the Great physician!

  1. Date: 1/20/2011 8:26:00 AM
    I enjoyed reading your excellent poetry this morning Erin. Wishing you a wonderful day. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 1/20/2011 3:00:00 AM
    Soothing devotional thoughts you have penned in this write, Erin