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A grand feast

the cobweb stirs
an enthusiastic spider
a grand feast



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By:kashinath karmakar (18th January,2011)

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  1. Date: 6/27/2011 7:43:00 PM
    the word [enthusiastic] is too intellectual show how he's enthusiastic? [buzzing dies down] would show he was eaten...Light & Love

  1. Date: 2/13/2011 3:59:00 PM
    This haiku is so visual, I could see that web stir~~

  1. Date: 2/1/2011 7:22:00 PM
    Hi, again and goodbye, my good friend. Just was checking if you left anything and I have to get off early for a change.See ya tomorrow. Luv, Andrea

  1. Date: 1/31/2011 1:38:00 AM
    great third line in this haiku, contgrast is striking. Déirdre

  1. Date: 1/26/2011 6:59:00 AM
    JUst going off to work now and stopping by to say hi, LUv, Andrea

  1. Date: 1/25/2011 7:41:00 AM
    ah this reminds me of Eric Carle's The Very Busy Spider--you familiar with that children's book author? definitely worth all the effort for the spider-- grand feast indeed for that spider :)-- nikko :)

  1. Date: 1/20/2011 11:10:00 AM
    Enthusiastic and so clever Kashinath....:)

  1. Date: 1/20/2011 6:33:00 AM
    When living in Papua New Guinea I have seen very big spiders with such strong cobwebs that would be even dangerous for birds! Nice Haiku, Kashinat!...Tc...Gert

  1. Date: 1/19/2011 9:44:00 PM
    LOVE the small change, Kashinath. (I think it is changed, right?)

  1. Date: 1/19/2011 4:31:00 PM
    Another interesting haiku, K.) this one sounds like a gourmet meal.. for an 8 legged insect.. enjoyed,..p.d.

  1. Date: 1/19/2011 1:07:00 PM
    What a vivid image of this hungry spider you give us, Kashinath. This would work well in Charles Henderson's contest and I hope you've entered it. I returned your Soup Mail. Quatrains can be abab or aabb rhyme schemes according to a variety of sources found on the internet. Same goes for sonnets. Thank you for looking at some of my older poems. Much appreciated. Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 1/19/2011 6:38:00 AM
    ooooh,great flow with superb ending, kashinath! with this fascinating 'ku, you're in good shape for the contest! good luck! :) huggs, nette

  1. Date: 1/19/2011 4:26:00 AM
    I am reading such amazing poetry this morning Kashinath. I am glad yours is among the ones I have had the pleasure to read today. I wish you a wonderful day filled with inspiration. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 1/18/2011 8:57:00 PM
    Kashinath, I love the image of the cobweb stirring and the spider feeling enthusiastic. I was curious why you did four lines instead of three. But I think lately I may have seen haiku with four lines somewhere! Hey, thanks for your comments to me today and I was happy to see these new poems of yours posted today! Luv, Andrea

  1. Date: 1/18/2011 6:00:00 PM
    Nice pen picture of the spider's grand feast, kashinath