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Cinderella is Dead

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Cinderella is Dead

In my perfectly ironed attire,
I seek the one I desire.

Here I am, at the ball,
Planning to catch your fall,
I hear you in my mind as your luscious eyes call,
Pride in my chest, as I stand so tall

With the glass shoe in my hand, our eyes meet
Our bodies greet
And by your side I place a seat

With the glass shoe in my hand, I place your foot in
And your foot does not fit

As the men around us laugh and grin
My heart more silent than a pin
As the hair rises on my skin
My jaw drops along with my chin

I was so sure you were the one
But I forcibly left instead
I was carried away in stun
And realized that the old fairy tale was dead

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  1. Date: 1/18/2011 9:14:00 PM

    Nice poem...Jimmy

  1. Date: 1/18/2011 7:41:00 PM

    Great metaphor for life and looking for Mr OR Miss Right!!

  1. Date: 1/18/2011 9:33:00 AM

    Good morning and thank you for sharing your poetry Bilal. It was a pleasure to read your poetry today and I hope you will continue to write. The best to you in your writing endeavors whatever they may be in 2011. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 1/18/2011 9:23:00 AM

    I enjoyed reading this today. It would make a good theme for a contest . God Bless Phyl