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FLAWLESS

 FLAWLESS


A flawless world.. Giving by your mother
Humanity holding hands like lovers..
Strung out deep into the sign of religion.
A flawless day at the park feeding pigeons
Attracting the positive light from the sun.
Where Global warming is undone.

A place where beauty is not found in the face.
Flawless beyond the mystery of space.
'Love' will be a feeling no one will resist .
'Hate' will be a word that won't exist.
Handing out smiles on a silver plate.
A world opened to the  golden gate.
Flawless like the wind brushing my hair.
Where my heart is filled with the warmness of care.

A flawless victory, even if we must die!

A flawless world, in a flawless dream.
Now wake me up before I scream.

~SKAT~

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  1. Date: 5/6/2013 9:00:00 PM

    Its great to dream Skat, we become flawed for losing sight of that dream, nicely done, blessings Carl

  1. Date: 4/19/2013 10:43:00 AM

    I have read some of your poems and this is definetely my favorite! Very creative!

  1. Date: 4/17/2013 2:49:00 PM

    Im reading your work and there is such a diversity of styles in your poems, you have an abundance of talent. Another enjoyable read and the punch line ending was a joy. Thanks for sharing with us.

  1. Date: 4/17/2013 1:31:00 PM

    Heya this is kaleb with the kkkkkk test haha I fixed my poem to be what it was intended, give it a second look and an opinion please. I'm going through some that you've posted right now and your very talented ;) I can't get enough of your inspiring writings!!

  1. Date: 6/4/2011 2:15:00 PM

    SKAT Nice poem, it is rhyming when I recited it. I enjoyed every line. Have fun writing! Thank you for following my poems. Dalila

  1. Date: 6/1/2011 12:46:00 AM

    SKAT!!! Wow... I like your writings... I should read more of your works... Mind if I make you as my fave poet? :)

  1. Date: 5/31/2011 4:54:00 PM

    Well done, I like the sarcasm. Perfect existence in an enternal state of consciousness? Pass. That's a nightmare.

  1. Date: 5/26/2011 9:40:00 PM

    this, i think is a masterpiece, it is so well put together, and is a enjoyable read...you rock...

  1. Date: 5/26/2011 8:58:00 PM

    back to this one. I think one of your very best poems ever, SKAT!

  1. Date: 5/26/2011 12:12:00 PM

    Enriching piece. VICTORY FLAWLESS!

  1. Date: 4/2/2011 2:26:00 PM

    Great couplet at the end, SKAT! The world would be a boring place if everything were perfect. Perfect sleep, perfect breakfast to start off another perfect day. Certainly a mind probe! Wishing you the best (flaws permtted) day! Mikki

  1. Date: 2/7/2011 10:33:00 AM

    yes!! you told me of your flawless poem. glad to see it today, even boldly and well expressed. love, lightning ink.

  1. Date: 2/4/2011 8:01:00 AM

    Hi Skat, Please check soup mail. Lainie

  1. Date: 2/4/2011 6:54:00 AM

    This poem not be flawless, but I love it anywho. You gots ta be unique. "Now wake me up before I scream!" Who but the great SKAT could come up with that. Love, Dave

  1. Date: 1/21/2011 2:11:00 PM

    you've out done your self here. this is a great work that i'm sure will give you some recognition as a poet. you reached in to a spiritual worlds depths to get this. john h loving iii

  1. Date: 1/21/2011 12:36:00 PM

    Hey S.K.A.T. what's up with u luv hope all is well and lovey dove... haha.. just trying to stay warm here in N.J. with these frigid temps and snow snow snow...oh oh oh... take care and enjoy a happy weekend with luv.. luv..

  1. Date: 1/20/2011 6:00:00 PM

    Hey Girlfriend This poem is like all your others, beautiful

  1. Date: 1/19/2011 6:24:00 PM

    smile, your beauty had myself strumming unto the tempo of this upbeat tune unto the final notes and then, the drumsticks broke upon your, 'wake me before i screams,' realities call -- i wanted to stop by to say hello and thank you for visiting a bit back; very kind -- love, christopher

  1. Date: 1/18/2011 4:28:00 PM

    enjoyed this mirror to the piece on P D's page, many points here to study, Skat i will keep in touch but my (retirement) is kicking in now,and other things, so i don't expect to be posting much. but will try if i get time enough, bye for now.

  1. Date: 1/18/2011 6:16:00 AM

    Just saying 'hi' to my BFF today with lots of luv on the way ... enjoy your day my dear friend.. and great response to your contest .. u are entertaining everyone with these themes..luv.. your BFF for life...

  1. Date: 1/18/2011 5:12:00 AM

    Just perfect and wonderful, yes, a flawless world is but a dream, best of luck in the contest with this amazing poem~~

  1. Date: 1/17/2011 10:13:00 PM

    I love your wishful thinking, what a wonderful poem this is Irma, thank you also for my placement in your contest. Love, Harry

  1. Date: 1/17/2011 10:03:00 PM

    I really liked the beautiful inspiring imagery and sentiments and I absolutely LOVED the ending! Utopia would be boring!

  1. Date: 1/17/2011 8:47:00 PM

    ps. I just saw PD did an opposite one on flaws. So are you guys teaming up to do the opposites?

  1. Date: 1/17/2011 8:46:00 PM

    SKAT, this is wonderful. One of your best! And why the heck do you want to wake up screaming? hahaha. LUv ya, Andrea

  1. Date: 1/17/2011 2:07:00 PM

    Wonderful write on flawless that inspires me to write one on the theme, Skat

  1. Date: 1/17/2011 1:51:00 PM

    A fine write dear poet, dreams are filled with longing, and your write exercises this fact, quite clearly ! Great write! much love, james

  1. Date: 1/17/2011 1:10:00 PM

    Simply beautifully written my BFF Irma and a wonderful expression of precious qualities all need to strive for... hope u enjoy my entry as well... this is super amazing my friend.. your BFF for life...

  1. Date: 1/17/2011 11:39:00 AM

    I am stopping by today to thank you for your kind comments S K A T*. It is always a pleasure to read your wonderful poetry. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 1/17/2011 9:24:00 AM

    ey, SKAT.. congrats for being FEATURED this week .. grear pome... wowoowie!! :) huggs, nette

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