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FLAWLESS

 FLAWLESS


A flawless world.. Giving by your mother
Humanity holding hands like lovers..
Strung out deep into the sign of religion.
A flawless day at the park feeding pigeons
Attracting the positive light from the sun.
Where Global warming is undone.

A place where beauty is not found in the face.
Flawless beyond the mystery of space.
'Love' will be a feeling no one will resist .
'Hate' will be a word that won't exist.
Handing out smiles on a silver plate.
A world opened to the  golden gate.
Flawless like the wind brushing my hair.
Where my heart is filled with the warmness of care.

A flawless victory, even if we must die!

A flawless world, in a flawless dream.
Now wake me up before I scream.

~SKAT~

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  1. Date: 4/16/2014 7:30:00 PM

    Hi Skat...Awesome ending....I really enjoyed this poem :) Ana

  1. Date: 3/20/2014 10:00:00 PM

    SKAT Don't wake up. Stay in this flawless world until the real world can be like your dream. Thanks for the great comment on my Pirates Plea poem. Hugs

  1. Date: 2/13/2014 2:02:00 AM

    nice poem! thanks for sharing

  1. Date: 1/27/2014 7:56:00 PM

    I respect the apparent ambivelance in this poem Skat, it seems to say, isn't potential just divine when realized, and then the victor takes a breath and thinks to herself, damn, whats there to fight for now! Another unique and challenging write. J.A.B.

  1. Date: 1/14/2014 7:40:00 AM

    "... where beauty is not found in the face" - if only our actions had more love in purpose. Hmm ... I'd scream because the reality isn't near flawless. Thanks for the welcome Skat.

  1. Date: 1/3/2014 12:27:00 AM

    haha ;) just the perfect way to wake up :) thats why it is said Imperfection is beauty :)))

  1. Date: 11/5/2013 12:20:00 AM

    Nicely ended. Reading your poetry gives me precious moments to enjoy things as they could be instead of how they really are. Thanks for the interlude.

  1. Date: 11/3/2013 7:02:00 AM

    Another great poem. I just didn't want to wake up. Great perspective!

  1. Date: 10/25/2013 9:30:00 AM

    ya if everything were perfect that would annoy me too i really like you poetry

  1. Date: 9/26/2013 1:42:00 PM

    There is no place that exists which can be flawless. Except maybe heaven! Wonderfully written poem, SKAT, this gives the reader much to ponder on!...Thank you for the nice comments, as always! Love, Kelly :)

  1. Date: 9/18/2013 4:08:00 PM

    Flawless doesn't exsist now but someday this will be a great world in which to live..Thanks for stopping by ..Your comments are uplifting..Great work that you have penned..Sara

  1. Date: 8/23/2013 10:31:00 PM

    Amazing vision! I loved it :)

  1. Date: 7/15/2013 4:23:00 AM

    Thanks for the encouraging words, I'm honored tohave you comment on my poem. YoYou're such an inspiring person with beautiful words of wisdom which is evident as I go through you work, true artists I say..... Amazing and thanks.

  1. Date: 7/9/2013 3:04:00 PM

    Beautifully written, I felt it right through!

  1. Date: 7/7/2013 9:40:00 AM

    no! ;-)

  1. Date: 6/15/2013 7:22:00 AM

    This poem would have to be my favourite from you.Its such a dynamic one.I love the energy I feel here,wonderful!

  1. Date: 5/25/2013 12:03:00 PM

    Flawless from various corners. This world is in real sense. Excellent beauty of your heartfelt sense adorned very cutely. Loved always, bl

  1. Date: 5/6/2013 9:00:00 PM

    Its great to dream Skat, we become flawed for losing sight of that dream, nicely done, blessings Carl

  1. Date: 4/19/2013 10:43:00 AM

    I have read some of your poems and this is definetely my favorite! Very creative!

  1. Date: 4/17/2013 2:49:00 PM

    Im reading your work and there is such a diversity of styles in your poems, you have an abundance of talent. Another enjoyable read and the punch line ending was a joy. Thanks for sharing with us.

  1. Date: 4/17/2013 1:31:00 PM

    Heya this is kaleb with the kkkkkk test haha I fixed my poem to be what it was intended, give it a second look and an opinion please. I'm going through some that you've posted right now and your very talented ;) I can't get enough of your inspiring writings!!

  1. Date: 6/4/2011 2:15:00 PM

    SKAT Nice poem, it is rhyming when I recited it. I enjoyed every line. Have fun writing! Thank you for following my poems. Dalila

  1. Date: 6/1/2011 12:46:00 AM

    SKAT!!! Wow... I like your writings... I should read more of your works... Mind if I make you as my fave poet? :)

  1. Date: 5/31/2011 4:54:00 PM

    Well done, I like the sarcasm. Perfect existence in an enternal state of consciousness? Pass. That's a nightmare.

  1. Date: 5/26/2011 9:40:00 PM

    this, i think is a masterpiece, it is so well put together, and is a enjoyable read...you rock...

  1. Date: 5/26/2011 8:58:00 PM

    back to this one. I think one of your very best poems ever, SKAT!

  1. Date: 5/26/2011 12:12:00 PM

    Enriching piece. VICTORY FLAWLESS!

  1. Date: 4/2/2011 2:26:00 PM

    Great couplet at the end, SKAT! The world would be a boring place if everything were perfect. Perfect sleep, perfect breakfast to start off another perfect day. Certainly a mind probe! Wishing you the best (flaws permtted) day! Mikki

  1. Date: 2/7/2011 10:33:00 AM

    yes!! you told me of your flawless poem. glad to see it today, even boldly and well expressed. love, lightning ink.

  1. Date: 2/4/2011 8:01:00 AM

    Hi Skat, Please check soup mail. Lainie

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