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Open Door

I thought what does it mean
when they would say 
He knocks on all doors
no concern if rich or poor
To my concern was I surrounded
by four walls 
engulfed in a empty room
with no way out
could anyone hear me
If I where to shout
Oh look what is this book
My Granddad had given to me
Why not see what is inside
I have heard 
Not to judge the cover
It is me and this book
I open and I  begin to read
What is that noise
I see cracks in the walls
outlining a door
The more I read it comes to life
the words are still alive 
I begin to believe
and to my surprise
I hear knock  knock
who could this be
I run to the outline of the door
In hope of someone setting me free
I yell please save me 
as I did all four walls 
Dropped!!

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  1. Date: 5/21/2011 6:56:00 PM

    I fully agree with this message. He will always answer our cries for help.

  1. Date: 3/15/2011 8:10:00 AM

    If we knock He will answer. If we ask we will receive, if we believe we will find eternal life. Loved this message in your poem. God Bless Phyl

  1. Date: 1/22/2011 4:00:00 PM

    This is a very good poem!! It reminds me of Jesus knocking on our doors, it is up to us to let him in.

  1. Date: 1/17/2011 10:10:00 AM

    reminds me of revelation 3:8 thanks for reading my,it was derived from 2 corinthians 5:7