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deb radke
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love true
love produces surrender surrender demands its due duty to obedience obeying love true
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Eiken Laan
Date: 1/21/2011 5:03:00 AM
Deb, this is a beauty, love it.:)))
Andrea Dietrich
Date: 1/17/2011 7:50:00 PM
Congratulations, Deb. YOurs had a wonderful message.
Poet Destroyer A
Date: 1/17/2011 5:51:00 PM
Congratulations on your win.. a very clever and charming poem,..p.d.
Sara Kendrick
Date: 1/17/2011 4:26:00 PM
Congratulations on your win..Sara
Eiken Laan
Date: 1/17/2011 1:55:00 PM
Beautiful Deb. Congratulations on your win.
Sharon Ruebel
Date: 1/17/2011 10:58:00 AM
Hello Deb, Congratulations on your win Deb, wonderful Dodoitsu. As Always, Shar
Francine Roberts
Date: 1/17/2011 10:53:00 AM
absolutely lovely, congrats on your win Deb
Carol Sunshine Brown
Date: 1/17/2011 8:40:00 AM
Congratulations for your win in the "Love or Humor" contest Deb, sponsored by John Freeman. Love, Carol
Joyce Johnson
Date: 1/16/2011 8:50:00 PM
Very nice Deb. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
Annalise Brigham
Date: 1/16/2011 7:10:00 PM
Always true, deb! Congratulations on your fantastic win in John's contest! Love, Annalise
nette onclaud
Date: 1/16/2011 5:50:00 PM
BIG cheers for the big win, deb..:) nette
Linda-Marie SweetHeart
Date: 1/16/2011 5:49:00 PM
Congrats Deb on your fantastic win in John's contest with this fabulous dodoitsu my friend.. enjoyed every line and another top tenner tonight too for u ..with luv..
john freeman
Date: 1/16/2011 3:24:00 PM
Thats the way it works Deb, Smile. Congratulations on your 3ard place with this worthy poem. Agape, Moses
Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 1/16/2011 3:15:00 PM
Very nice, Deb. Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn
Dr.Ram Mehta
Date: 1/16/2011 3:08:00 PM
Congratulations on the well deserved win in the contest, deb
Eamon Duffin
Date: 1/16/2011 10:53:00 AM
Hi again. The poem is by Robert Pettit. Eamon
Eamon Duffin
Date: 1/16/2011 10:50:00 AM
Hi Deb. Great write, ( as usual). have you seen that there is a poem for all the 'Debs', on the site. Cheers, Eamon
Robert Pettit
Date: 1/16/2011 7:25:00 AM
One of the better examples of dodoitsu I have seen on this site. Good one!
Anna-Marie Docherty
Date: 1/16/2011 2:50:00 AM
Very cleverly thought out piece... Love this! Thanks for your most welcome comments on my writing, good to see you, ;D Anna-Marie.
Dr.Ram Mehta
Date: 1/15/2011 3:01:00 PM
Nice steps to gain the true love, deb
Joe Flach
Date: 1/15/2011 2:22:00 PM
Profound indeed. I surrender, I surrender ... Love it. Joe
john freeman
Date: 1/15/2011 2:20:00 PM
Deb, thanks for your support of my Contests, it doesn't go unnoticed. Agape, Moses
Andrea Dietrich
Date: 1/15/2011 1:49:00 PM
wow, short and profound, deb. Nicely done!!
