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Weakest Link

Weakest Link

Belt around a size eight waist
curtains waiting to be close
undressed, with a weak link touch
hard like a buckle.

M.J.F.  (lady contest)

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  1. Devonshire Avatar
    Carolyn Devonshire
    Date: 6/11/2011 10:40:00 AM
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    Very thought-provoking poem, Hathor. Sensual as well! Thanks for your comment. Hope you post some new work soon. Love, Carolyn
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    Gerard Keogh Jr.
    Date: 1/17/2011 2:21:00 PM
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    I love the unusual perspective inherent in this. A unique way to look at this. Thank you for your kindness! Regards, Gerard
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    harry horsman
    Date: 1/16/2011 10:55:00 PM
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    The mind ponders on this wondeful poem, just love it, good luck in contest. Harry
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    M.I.A .
    Date: 1/15/2011 3:37:00 PM
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    Provoking! welcome to the soup and good luck on the contest. thanks for stopping by

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    Linda-Marie SweetHeart
    Date: 1/15/2011 2:31:00 PM
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    thankxxx for supporting Michael's part of our co sponsored contest Hathor.. good luck and will read fully closer to judging time..luv.. appreciate ...
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    Carolyn Devonshire
    Date: 1/15/2011 9:37:00 AM
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    This is a very sensual poem that paints a vivid image, Hathor. Awesome! I think this is the first poem of yours that I've read and I'll surely be on the lookout for more. Best wishes and a belated welcome to Poetry Soup, Carolyn
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    Tahera Mannan
    Date: 1/15/2011 6:51:00 AM
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    Hey that's pretty hot entry Lin~ra. Thanks for commenting on my work dear. Have a cool weekend.
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    Gert W. Knop
    Date: 1/15/2011 6:36:00 AM
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    Cool entry, Lin~Ra! Thank you for your kind comments! Have a great weekend and best of luck in the contest!...Gert
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    nette onclaud
    Date: 1/14/2011 11:18:00 PM
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    fine write,lin~ra!! good luck in the contest!! hanks for dropping by... hope you will again some time! :) nette
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    Annalise Brigham
    Date: 1/14/2011 11:06:00 PM
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    Good luck in Michael and Linda's "Spicy" Contest, Lin~Ra! Spicy one for real... Always, Annalise
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    Poet Destroyer A
    Date: 1/14/2011 10:49:00 PM
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    sweet , cool entry,, good luck in the contest,..p.d.
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    Andrea Dietrich
    Date: 1/14/2011 10:00:00 PM
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    SPICY!!! And reads like haiku. LUv, Andrea
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    James Marshall Goff
    Date: 1/14/2011 9:56:00 PM
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    this one gets a "holy cow!!!" welcome to the soup! Ammut Lin Ra!!!! you're cool!!!! jimbo
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    binibining P.iNk
    Date: 1/14/2011 9:43:00 PM
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    definitely a spicy contender in the contest, Lin~Ra; really like your title for this too, very fitting if I may say so :)-- wish you the best in the contest :) -- nikko :)



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