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Saved For Raven

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Saved For Raven

Her daddy’s grave is the oldest,
His name is hard to read.
She knew his stone had corroded
And has brought supplies she’ll need.

Near to him is her young husband.
He had been the next to die.
She used to come here often
Just to sit by his grave and cry.

Next to her daddy is her mother
After twenty-one years alone 
Her name shows up clearer and newer
On her side of the stone.

As the years went by the lot filled up,
A beloved young nephew is there.
She reads his age of twenty-three
And thinks that it isn’t fair.

The lot started filling faster
With loved brothers and their wives.
She remembers kneeling with her loved son
And speaking with him of their lives.

And now there’s a grave much newer.
She hadn’t thought she would see this one.
His name is there so clear and bright,
The name of her only son.

She looks down to where she is standing
As she feels the cold wind stir. 
RAVEN is chiseled into the rock
At this spot reserved for her.


lBy: Joyce Johnson  shared first place with Linda Marie and Carrie.

For Constance "The Rambling Poet; contest "Among the Dead"











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  1. Date: 2/25/2011 10:46:00 AM

    wow this is a great poem

  1. Date: 2/24/2011 11:22:00 AM

    I had only read a couple of the poems and wanted so badly to enter but...too many things were going on and didn't get to. I knew Constance would have a time selecting her winners. There is a long list of winners here. You should be so proud of your winning poem congratulations Joyce. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 2/23/2011 12:49:00 AM

    Very nice work! Congrats on your win u greatly deserve it:) Virginia

  1. Date: 2/19/2011 7:03:00 AM

    Many congratulations Joyce on your fine win in Constance's wonderful contest....:)

  1. Date: 2/18/2011 4:47:00 PM

    Congratulations on your win..Sara

  1. Date: 2/18/2011 2:24:00 PM

    Yup, you nailed it for Constance! Congrad's Light & Love

  1. Date: 2/18/2011 1:47:00 PM

    OMG Joyce a really fabulous read and a well desevered 1st.place win.~Teresa~

  1. Date: 2/18/2011 11:21:00 AM

    Wonderful story you have penned here Joyce!Congrats on your 1st place win----kashinath

  1. Date: 2/18/2011 10:08:00 AM

    Absolutely amazing Joyce! Congrats on your well deserved win!~Tirzah~

  1. Date: 2/18/2011 6:32:00 AM

    Excellent composition and great thought--the description well matching the scenario and the title of your poem. I liked the simplicity with which you have done it... Congrats -- you rightly deserved the first place

  1. Date: 2/18/2011 5:54:00 AM

    I told you this was a stand-out work, Joyce. So happy for your first-place wn! Congratulations! Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 2/18/2011 5:22:00 AM

    a stirring write that's a topper, jiyce! CONGRATS to you!! ;) huggs, nette

  1. Date: 2/18/2011 4:58:00 AM

    I like how nicely you've built the story around the single specified character. Congrats on the first place !

  1. Date: 2/18/2011 12:05:00 AM

    Incredible story Joyce. Congratulations on your WELL DESERVED FIRST PLACE WIN. Lainie

  1. Date: 2/17/2011 8:20:00 PM

    This was a truly well deserved win. many congratulations.

  1. Date: 2/17/2011 5:48:00 PM

    An extraordinary write! Congratulations on your first place win. I truly enjoyed the read. Caryl

  1. Date: 2/17/2011 5:47:00 PM

    I'm so honored to share this spot with you, Joyce. Well deserved winning this 1st place spot in Constance's contest!! Congratulations

  1. Date: 2/17/2011 5:36:00 PM

    Beautiful job Joyce, Cpmngratulations on you first place honor. Agape, Moses

  1. Date: 2/17/2011 5:25:00 PM

    wonderful poem Joyce, a well deserved winner. Harry

  1. Date: 2/17/2011 5:19:00 PM

    Congratulations on the first place win in the contest, Joyce

  1. Date: 2/17/2011 5:10:00 PM

    I had to take a look at the number one winner of this contest. I see why Constance chose this one to be top of the heap. Reading this one reminded me of a nearby memorial park where a good number of my relatives are laid to rest. I just lost a cousin a few weeks ago, and he is now at this park. This is impressive. Congratulations.

  1. Date: 2/17/2011 5:03:00 PM

    Number 1 and having fun! Congratulations Joyce. RAY

  1. Date: 2/17/2011 4:48:00 PM

    Congratulations on your super Ist Place win in the contest, "Among the Dead", Joyce! Well earned! Love, Annalise

  1. Date: 2/17/2011 4:34:00 PM

    Congrats Joyce on your first place win in Among the Dead with this exceptional entry my friend.. enjoy with luv..

  1. Date: 2/17/2011 4:02:00 PM

    Congratualtions, Joyce on first place in my contest with this breathtaking poem. Could you send me your address by soup mail so I can forward your Certificate of Achievement in Poetry~~

  1. Date: 1/30/2011 10:44:00 AM

    You have great rhyme and flow, and an ability to spark the readers emotion. But damn!!! now Im all sad. lol

  1. Date: 1/17/2011 12:53:00 PM

    Just wanted to stop by again, Joyce. I've been reading many of the Raven entries as they came in and yours truly stands out. I can't get the ending of it out of my mind. That only happens once in a while with poetry as I read so many poems, but I love this one! It's haunting me now and will be added to my favorites. Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 1/14/2011 8:40:00 AM

    Oh wow....you did a great job in this most difficult contest!! Constance will indeed have a difficult time!

  1. Date: 1/14/2011 3:25:00 AM

    This is the second entry to this contest i've read, and Oh Boy Constance will have one hell of a hard time, if the rest of them are like these two. This is wonderful Joyce Absolutly stunning. Harry

  1. Date: 1/14/2011 3:24:00 AM

    Oh, this is positively chilling and magnificent, Joyce. What a brilliant interpretation of the photo. I'm predicting the top spot for this one. I still feel the goosebumps. Many of us can relate to watching the family cemetery plot expand throughout the years, but I never expected the Hitchcock twist at the end. Wow! No luck is needed to win this one. Excellent work! I have a concept in mind but haven't developed it yet. I see the entries are rolling in so perhaps tomorrow. Love, Carolyn

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