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  1. Date: 1/10/2011 4:59:00 PM
    VERY powerful write, my friend. GOOD ONE!

  1. Date: 1/10/2011 4:13:00 PM
    Excellent write Stephen.. thoroughly enjoyed your presentation and I would categorize it as Free Verse.. though the rhyme is super good luv.. a broad aspect to look beyond what we see and could see.. thankxx for enjoying my little Senryu today luv..

  1. Date: 1/10/2011 12:56:00 PM
    How true that our existence is dependent on that perfect balance of sun and rain. It seems in modern times that man has wrought havoc with Mother Nature's rain forests, polluted air and contaminated water. Perhaps we are reaping some sort of payback with the droughts, floods, earthquakes and volcanic eruptions, Stephen. We should heed your advice in this poem and take better care of our natural resources. Our survival depends on it. Well said, my friend. Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 1/9/2011 6:55:00 AM
    may nature be blessed with such beaity like this impeccable piece, stephe.. i like gaea; nice metaphor on thia on.. wow! :) nette

  1. Date: 1/9/2011 3:31:00 AM
    Topical poem, interesting.