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Sugarcoat

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Sugarcoat

Dip the truth in sugar. Now it's safe to eat.
Point the twisted finger. Don't admit defeat.

Carve your name in stone, just to tell your sons.
A caper bent on error, and twisted by the gloves.

Mark my mind with paint, what a wild taste.
Echo promises before the big erase.

Leave a jar on every step, you've promised and you've broken.
You're not one for the people, an elitist for the tokens.

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  1. Date: 8/2/2011 8:46:00 AM
    Congratulations on your poetry making it through round one in the PoetrySoup International contest Jeremy. I wish you the best in the final round. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 8/2/2011 3:16:00 AM
    Superb writing Jeremy. Congratulations on making it through the first round and best wishes on making it to the Finals. Lainie

  1. Date: 7/10/2011 1:06:00 PM
    Congratulations on your poem being featured this week Jeremy. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 1/8/2011 3:04:00 PM
    Nice lyric. Jimmy