Submit a Poem
Get Your Premium Membership
Member Area
Member Area
My Poems
My Profile
My Inboxes
My Outboxes
Submit Poem
Soup Social
The Wall
Chat Room
Soup Facebook Page
Poetry Forum
Events Calendar
Who is Online
Past Polls (Archives)
Member Poets/Poems
Premium Members For Life
Poets
Poets - New
Poets - by Country
Poets - Top 100 Poems
Poets - Top 100 Popular
Poets - Top 100 Contests
Poets - Top 100 Community
Poems
Poems - Best Poems
Poems - by Country
Poems - Hindi
Poems - Long Poems
Poems - New
Poems - New by Poet
Poems - Poem Topics
Poems - Poetry
Poems - Random Poem
Poems - Read Poems
Poems - Search Poems
Poems - Short Poems
Poems - Top 100 All-Time
Poems - Top 100 Recent
Poems - Unread
Poems - Urdu
Famous Poets/Poems
Famous Poets
Famous Poets - All
Famous Poets - Beat
Famous Poets - Best
Famous Poets - Biographies
Famous Poets - Black
Famous Poets - by Country
Famous Poets - Classical
Famous Poets - English
Famous Poets - Hindi
Famous Poets - Jewish
Famous Poets - Metaphysical
Famous Poets - Modern
Famous Poets - Popular
Famous Poets - Quotes
Famous Poets - Romantic
Famous Poets - Top 100
Famous Poets - Urdu
Famous Poets - Women
Famous Poems
Famous Poems - Best
Famous Poems - Black
Famous Poems - Category
Famous Poems - Classical
Famous Poems - English
Famous Poems - Random
Famous Poems - Short
Famous Poems - Top 100
Contests
Contests: by PoetrySoup
Contests: by Members
Contest Winners: Soup
Contest Winners: Member
Contest Status: Member
Lyrics
Lyrics
Lyrics - Search
Resources
About PoetrySoup
The Bible
Character Counter
Cliches in Poetry
Common English Words
Copyright Information
Dictionary
eBooks - Poetry
FAQs
Grammar
Haiku Syllable Counter
History of Poetry
Homonyms
Homophones
How to Write a Poem
Love Poem Generator
Meter and Foot in Poetry
National Poetry Month
Poet Laureate
Poetics
Poetics of Aristotle
Poetry For Kids
Poetry
Poetry Definitions
Poetry Slam
Poetry Store
Poetry Out Loud
Prose
Publishing
Punctuation in Poetry
Quotes - Quotations
Resources - External
Resources - For Teachers
Rhyming Dictionary
Rhyme in Poetry
Spell Checker
Syllables
Syllable Counter
Syllable Rules
Teaching Prose and Poetry
Thesaurus
Videos: Poetry/Writing
What is Good Poetry?
What is Poetry?
Word Counter
spacer
Pinterest button
Comments Inbox

 

Slap Stick it to me 

He’s sorry and wished it undone
But dad’s home—there’s no where to run  
The spanking's intense
Father never relents        
And imprints his hands on his son

Please Login to post a comment
 
  1. Duncan Avatar
    Debbie Duncan
    Date: 3/29/2013 12:34:00 AM
    Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I very much like the way you wrote this. That's the way I came up. ,,,, belt or a tree switch. A lot of times we had to go get our own switch ;} that was my mom . Whom I love with out a doubt. Hey you have a blessed Easter Sunday Duke ;}
  1. Lamoureux Avatar
    Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 11/20/2012 3:03:00 PM
    Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    You have skills, I have never tried this form. The trouble with reading a masters work is that it appears to be deceptively easy. As with other styles that is far from the truth.
  1. Kendrick Avatar
    Sara Kendrick
    Date: 1/11/2011 4:49:00 PM
    Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Well, that is the way it used to be and I am sure that in some homes that is the way it still is...The loving mother or father have more agony about the discipline than most children do..Enjoyed your work very much..Yes, the Maple syrup that I was referring to was the real thing and I was sad when the bottle was empty for it is very expense and I probably will not have any more for a long time..The corn syrup that is used as a sweetener now ruins everything..It has an odd taste..Sara
  1. SweetHeart Avatar
    Linda-Marie SweetHeart
    Date: 1/10/2011 12:25:00 PM
    Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Well not allowed any longer Duke my friend but a grand Limerick as only u can pen them luv.. now they call is 'abuse'..if u spank anyone... even adults..haha... nice to see u looking up the "Sweetheart" and happy new year with lots of luv..
  1. loving iii Avatar
    john loving iii
    Date: 1/10/2011 3:55:00 AM
    Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    we raise soldiers not cowards and theives. john
  1. khan Avatar
    yasmin khan
    Date: 1/10/2011 2:48:00 AM
    Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    This limerick just rocks.Thank you for writing in and congratulating me Beau.
  1. Dietrich Avatar
    Andrea Dietrich
    Date: 1/9/2011 11:17:00 PM
    Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Duke thanks for your sweet comments to me today. well, it's good you can find humor in these things from your childhood. My hubbie had to get past a lot of emotional stuff once he left home and it can be quite difficult. Let me reread another limerick you explained to me.
  1. K. A. T. Avatar
    S. K. A. T.
    Date: 1/9/2011 6:46:00 PM
    Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    way to stick it
  1. Anderson Avatar
    Jimmy Anderson
    Date: 1/8/2011 7:08:00 PM
    Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Very funny but painful...Jimmy
  1. Dietrich Avatar
    Andrea Dietrich
    Date: 1/7/2011 10:58:00 PM
    Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    So it must have been YOU the son, from that title. Good one, Duke.


spacer© PoetrySoup | Terms and Conditions | Privacy Statement | FAQs | Contact Us | About Us