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REVELATION

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REVELATION

     
     
      Like a rose by autumn broken,
      losing charm of wound in the frost,
      so with a tear in me 
      your heart -my heart hurts.
      And I'm not care not color nor bird,
      no feel sorry for this tiny drass,
      in each image and star I found
      see a shadow of your trail not once,
      captured by the visual fraud,
      fly like free butterfly in your sections 
      and search and call, but you're not
      your are not a bird nor a blade,you are
      just a piece of my heart and breath....


     
                                   
                                                   /"REVELATION" -Natalia Georgieva/

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  1. Date: 1/19/2011 10:14:00 AM

    Tanks for the repy mr.Freemen! It is an honor... But is not is beter as an idea,these honorable place to be evidenced by documents... Sincerely N.Georgieva

  1. Date: 1/19/2011 9:01:00 AM

    I place you as an honorable mention, Georgieva. Thanks for honoring my Contest with your entry. Agape, Moses

  1. Date: 1/17/2011 4:15:00 PM

    Very descriptive and expressive work..Congrats..Sara

  1. Date: 1/17/2011 2:10:00 PM

    Congratulations on this beautiful piece of writing:)))

  1. Date: 1/17/2011 11:24:00 AM

    Hello Natalig, This is so beautiful, what precious words you have penned here. Congratulations for this lovely Poem. As Always, Shar

  1. Date: 1/17/2011 8:51:00 AM

    Congratulations for your win in the "Love or Humor" contest Nataliq sponsored by John Freeman. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 1/16/2011 7:27:00 PM

    Hey Nataliq! Congratulations on your Honorable Mention Placement in John's contest! Always, Annalise

  1. Date: 1/16/2011 6:06:00 PM

    Congrats Natalig on your fantastic HM in John's contest with this fabulous entry ... enjoy your special honor tonight with luv..

  1. Date: 1/16/2011 3:56:00 PM

    I loved your revelation, Nataliq. Congratulations on your success in my contest. Agape, Moses

  1. Date: 1/16/2011 3:17:00 PM

    Congratulations on the well deserved win inn the contest, Nataliq

  1. Date: 1/16/2011 3:03:00 PM

    A good ensemble of words in this composition.

  1. Date: 1/8/2011 9:23:00 AM

    Smile ~ First I wish to sincerely say that, "I Love 'Your Beautiful Name' My 'Dear, Precious & Priceless, Natalia Georgieva!!!'" ~ Second, upon the rereading of this extremely soulful painting of "A Beautiful Canvas" I can say, not only is it very movingly lovely but, "Keep Brushing, From That Trove of 'Your Beautiful Soul!!!'" ~ "My Love & Warmth to 'You & Yours,' Always," John! ~ Smile, "Have A Very 'Blessed & Beautiful' Day & New Year, My Dear;" Bye!:) ~