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I Long To Be The One

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I Long To Be The One

I know it’s hard to say what you feel…
Hard to describe what you want..
And after analyzing things too thoroughly
You come to the conclusion that you can’t,
You can’t give me the chance I’m asking for
The chance you would find easier giving him…
The way you’ve described his pros and cons
My chances seem very slim…
And I can’t seem to comprehend
What you see in him that you don’t see in me…
We never started as friends… but…
I just can’t seem to agree…
That he would be the best option
Or if even an option at all!
Because I know that with him,
The love would surely start to fall…
If I would have just that one chance
To show you my overwhelming heart
You would see things more clearly
And know that it would never fall apart…
I know that this stirs up confusion…
And your heart can’t seem to choose
But in the end of this story…
Eventually one of us must lose…
I just hope you can look at me…
And know that I would do whatever it takes…
To make you happy, to see you smile
For at the end of the day… it’s up to faith

Eliel202

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