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Rain - Fall Upon Me Again

She entered my life upon happenstance.
I was unaware and naive.
No angels to carry my chin.
No raindrops to cleanse my emptiness.
"I am a landscaper without a garden.
Surely, you cannot help me?"

An unhesitant smile bewitched me.
I began to drown within the scent of her hair.
Her left eyelash softly brushed my cheek
rendering me captured and speechless.

"My name is Rain."
I paused. I silently swallowed.
Her simplistic beauty enveloped me.
Cerulean eyes. Crimson lips. Indigo lashes.
Our fingertips entwined and my being
was suffocated into the magical beating of her heart.

I bowed my head and stammered:
"I've never flown above canyons before."
"I usually sink into the bottom of an empty lake."
Rain kept silent. She spoke to me through her eyes.
Riding upon the wings of an ivory stallion, we glided.
A crystal ball of wonderment she bequeathed me.
She abled me to envision:

Memories from my past.
Hopes of my present.
Dreams for my future.
Our journey seemed like an eternity.
A carousel ride a child never wants to cease;
a mysterious enchantress I wanted to stay.

I didn't expect her exit.

The clouds swelled around her flowing silk cloak;
her wings of white. I remember now. I wanted to cry 
as she drifted into the inviting dusk. 
I thought I was sobbing but was mistaken. 
I was basking in the memories, 
hopes, dreams and 
the promise of tomorrows
with the glorious teardrops of 
my guardian angel.
"Rain...
whisper your sacred lullabyes and
fall upon me again.
Please, fall upon me 
again."

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  1. Date: 3/2/2011 6:10:00 AM
    Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured on PoetrySoup this week Kory. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 2/27/2011 7:42:00 PM
    Congrats Kory on your featured poem this week on the Soup.. a great write to share with us all with luv..

  1. Date: 2/12/2011 10:44:00 PM
    gosh, I HAVE seen all your poems now. I await a new one!!!! Andrea

  1. Date: 2/10/2011 5:18:00 PM
    Lovely write Kory. Light & Love

  1. Date: 2/6/2011 7:27:00 AM
    Dear Kory. Congratulations on YOUR well deserved Win in Constance's Contest "Rain, the Story" A very Warm Welcome to the Family of POETRYSOUP YOU are a Refreshing addition to the Family Any Questions just ask anyone of the many Great POETS on site Thank-YOU for YOUR gracious Comment on my POETRY Always YOUR Liege...HG

  1. Date: 2/6/2011 5:55:00 AM
    I love to go back and read someones first entry to Soup, and Im not disapointed at all... wonderful write my friend...Michael

  1. Date: 2/4/2011 3:02:00 PM
    Hello Kory, Let me just say that I am so pleased to meet you. Thank you for visiting me and leaving the well wishes. Kory, this poem you have written is indeed a wonderful work! I have re read it now twice. Your very gifted I think and I wish you all the best both here at Soup and also in all your endeavors. As Always, Shar

  1. Date: 1/21/2011 10:01:00 AM
    I don't know how I missed this wonderful poem, Kory! I will now look for more of yours, ...this is such a wonderful entry, and I am so pleased to see it in the winning circle !! Thanks so much for your kind comments...I appreciate them very much, so glad to welcome you to the soup family! ~ Carrie

  1. Date: 1/18/2011 9:06:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win with this one in the contest..Great beginnings on soup..May your stay be long with many more post like this one..Your presence at my work sent me a ray not a stingray but a sun ray on this cloudy, rainy day in Georgia...Thanks for letting me know of my place in the contest..Sara

  1. Date: 1/18/2011 2:49:00 AM
    Beautiful and clever interpretatiion here. Congratulations on this deserved win. Déirdre

  1. Date: 1/17/2011 11:57:00 AM
    This is a beautiful poem and a very romantic interpretation of the contest theme, Kory. I love the last verse when you call on Rain to fall upon you again. Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 1/14/2011 9:26:00 AM
    Congratulations Kory on your win in A Rambling Poet's contest "Rain,The Story". Love, Carol

  1. Date: 1/13/2011 4:21:00 PM
    Kory this is absolutely beautiful. I am pleased to be able to see it among these other winning poems. A big congratulations to a much deserved win. LUv, Andrea

  1. Date: 1/13/2011 11:27:00 AM
    Very romantic interpretation of the contest. Congratulations. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 1/13/2011 6:36:00 AM
    Congratulations on this well deserved win in the contest of Constance, Kory

  1. Date: 1/13/2011 3:28:00 AM
    kory, such a beautifully woven tale!! cheers for bagging a great win in the contest!! : ) nette

  1. Date: 1/12/2011 9:12:00 PM
    Many Congrats Kory on big win with this imaginative verse.Best wishes/Luv - Hitendra Mehta

  1. Date: 1/12/2011 9:09:00 PM
    Many Congrats Kory on big win with this imaginative verse.Best wishes/Luv - Hitendra Mehta

  1. Date: 1/12/2011 8:33:00 PM
    Congrats Kory on your amazing win in the Rain Story contest with this elegant entry .. enjoy your top ten success with luv..

  1. Date: 1/6/2011 8:02:00 PM
    Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed reading your contest entry tonight for Constance and good luck with this elegant piece... hope your time on Soup will be fun and filled with sharing... with luv...

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