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self is paramount
as me myself and I rule
desires infinite


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  1. Date: 1/7/2011 5:18:00 PM
    Magnificent description Stephen and a well written Senryu with descriptive quality.. enjoyed with luv ..happy weekend...

  1. Date: 1/6/2011 12:23:00 PM
    One consumate narcissist, as history tells..there's a saying in my old country that goes like this, "The thing you love the most is usually what takes your life". Darn good Senryu. Always, Audrey

  1. Date: 1/4/2011 5:19:00 PM
    Very, very cool write. There are many who seem quite self enamored, Stephen! Or should I call you Rasputin. Hmm -- maybe Roskolinikov? I'll be traveling but staying in touch with one of my favorites. Thanks for the Soup mail; it's been returned. Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 1/4/2011 5:02:00 PM
    Hey, this goes along with my Greed poem!! I could put my mother in law as the title of this one (sorry, I'm so bad).

  1. Date: 1/4/2011 1:58:00 PM
    Truth can be found in this one for sure..I am glad that I chose this out of all those available for me to read ....Your presence at my work sent a lasar beam in through the darkness of my day...Sara

  1. Date: 1/4/2011 10:57:00 AM
    I like your words and take in this well constructed senyru...a poet you are my friend...

  1. Date: 1/4/2011 10:42:00 AM
    the vanity of ego so well expressed here, stephen... undauntingly haunting! thanks for coming over my side of the tracks! :) nette