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My Perfect Story

  
  
The Perfect Story!!

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ingredients.... what my perfect story would have in it!

 

I spread my wings, 

to carry you into that perfect ride.

Allowing you to communicate with my mind.

I'll show you what my perfect story would have in it.

With the world's enigma not every one can find.

Words twisted with reality and beauty divine

The majestic ways to live with fairy tales combined.

Show no weakness towards the mercy of my gift.

Unleash the lightning, leaving all competition behind.

Pierce every word with my gleaming eyes.

You'll find yourself in the ebony of the blind.

A space passing every constellation with no regrets of return.

Assault the moment of the mind with the perfect line..

Expect pain, love, death, and desires that burn.

A trap for the follower to sink in.

Losing yourself to the evil garden underneath the green fern. 

Falling in love with the mental link of my imagination.

Rising from the ashes that killed every demon in my nations.

Rescued by the light of he who rode the wind of fate.

Breaking an oath to give every perfect story a-

 "HAPPY ENDING!"

 

~SKAT~
 

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  1. Date: 4/20/2013 12:41:00 AM

    I love this one! :) such a good work!

  1. Date: 4/18/2013 1:32:00 AM

    I'd love to be in this story you speak of. A place where words are more accepted and cherished, rather than avoided so much in nowadays. Your imagination excelled in this one Skat, a pleasure to read!

  1. Date: 2/25/2013 5:31:00 PM

    This is an excellent work, thank you for your comments, i really appreciate it

  1. Date: 2/16/2013 10:05:00 PM

    Hello, my dearest Skat! Stopping by to say HI and sending you my warmest hugs! How are you? I hope you're always doing fine! I'm missing you, too! Well, I'm so happy to read this perfect poem and story of yours! I love it so much! You're so talented poet too! Thank you so much for sharing! Have a great day! love always and forever, Leonora

  1. Date: 12/3/2012 6:03:00 PM

    What a great description of what we are all doing when we post our words in hopes of making connections across time and space. Beautiful descriptive poem. Your wings have truly gapped the distance with ease.

  1. Date: 6/1/2011 8:37:00 AM

    This is lovely.. :)

  1. Date: 6/1/2011 2:21:00 AM

    Magnificent piece of work You are a brilliant poet..whats the story behind the name SKAT??

  1. Date: 5/27/2011 6:52:00 PM

    this was awesome nice job! cory

  1. Date: 5/26/2011 6:19:00 AM

    Everyone loves a happy ending...not always attainable in life, but a writer can give his or her story any ending they wish! This is a good, creative write. Some good ingredients here, and nicely put together too! Regards, Robert.

  1. Date: 3/20/2011 3:01:00 PM

    Hi, Skat, just dropping by to say hi, miss you!

  1. Date: 2/9/2011 12:30:00 PM

    I do fall in love with "The mental link of your imagination" It is an ever inspiring place to reboost my sagging spirit! Thank you!

  1. Date: 2/5/2011 5:21:00 PM

    smile -- and i too, love happy endings as i also do, joyful and passionates, love stories ~ i am surely hoping that, "Your Many Splendours," shall somehow find the time to bless Us all with more of, "Your Beauties," fabulous canvas' of uniquely gifted art my dear; and Yes, but another fave amid the faves, from, "A Beautiful Light." ~ love, Always, christopher ~

  1. Date: 2/5/2011 5:14:00 PM

    smile -- such an Astonishingly Beautiful journey winding through the constellations of both, intrigue and fascination my dear, "Gifted & Precious, 'Beautiful Skat*.'" ~ never am i disappointed when my eyes behold, "Your Beautifies," colourful canvas' of creations my dear for, they always seem hold these, radiant hues amid enchantings picturesque views; be they black or white, sour sweet or bright -- cont:)

  1. Date: 1/10/2011 5:22:00 PM

    perfect' audree

  1. Date: 1/10/2011 7:46:00 AM

    Interesting work..Wonder if there is a contest going on this one..Your presence at my work brightened my cloudy, icy, snowny, cold winter day..Sara

  1. Date: 1/9/2011 5:42:00 PM

    Irma,that would be so FINE to have a happy ending and a perfect story like you describe here. Glad to see you in the new year. How are you, girl?? YOu did not answer any of my blog questions,but I sure appreciated your comment there. LUv, Andrea

  1. Date: 1/8/2011 6:56:00 AM

    I surly got attatched to this write quickly dear poet ! Great write ! much love, james

  1. Date: 1/7/2011 8:00:00 AM

    Brilliant write, SKAT! Enjoyed the reado of every single line! An thank you for your kind comments! Have a great ne year! Love, Gert

  1. Date: 1/5/2011 3:49:00 AM

    Beautiful skat, does heaps for my imagination. Harry

  1. Date: 1/4/2011 4:21:00 PM

    great journey in your words SKAT.

  1. Date: 1/4/2011 12:45:00 PM

    fleeting, flowing, flavorful, festivous, friendly, fondly, and famously flawless - the work of a master - thank you for the journey to a happy ending. chuck

  1. Date: 1/4/2011 11:32:00 AM

    gaily prancing down the line... such a flowing, floating gift, SKAT! yes, yes, yes!! :) nette

  1. Date: 1/4/2011 9:32:00 AM

    Very nice story told Skat.... your words capture the readers eyes and don't let go..enjoyed....luv Michael