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My Perfect Story

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My Perfect Story

The Perfect Story


Ingredients.... My Epic Melody!

 
I spread my wings, 

To carry you into that perfect ride.

Allowing you to communicate with my mind.

I'll show you what my perfect story would have in it.

With the world's enigma not everyone can find.

Words twisted with reality and beauty divine

The majestic ways to live with fairy tales combined.

Show no weakness towards the mercy of my gift.

Unleash the lightning, leaving all competition behind.

Pierce every word with my gleaming eyes.

You'll find yourself in the ebony of the blind.

A space passing every constellation with no regrets of return.

Assault the moment of the mind with the perfect line..

Expect pain, love, death, and desires that burn.

A trap for the follower to sink in.

Losing yourself to the evil garden underneath the green fern. 

Falling in love with the mental link of my imagination.

Rising from the ashes that killed every demon in my nations.

Rescued by the light of he who rode the wind of fate.

Breaking an oath to give every perfect story a-

 "HAPPY ENDING!"

 
~SKAT~

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  1. Date: 6/13/2014 12:10:00 AM
    Just came by to say hello, SKAT. Glad I read this--twice. You never fail to please. Btw, thanks for commenting on my Maiden poem. I've decided to keep her locked up indefinitely lol

  1. Date: 3/14/2014 7:31:00 AM
    Thanks SKAT for commenting on my first poem on the site!

  1. Date: 3/10/2014 12:17:00 AM
    Thanks SKAT, for more kind words, I'm just having good clean fun with others. We are both very lucky to have good understanding mates. My wife and I, enjoy one anothers company, as you and your hubby........Write on! SKAT

  1. Date: 1/30/2014 7:49:00 AM
    I was sure this was going to be a Mary Poppins type tale but it surprised me . You have a very active imagination and it is beautifully expressed.

  1. Date: 10/30/2013 7:55:00 AM
    Alwaz on it Skat,love your style soooo grand and deep. Keep the fire burning! Thanks a lot for your congratulatory messages,I really appreciate dearest one. Big hugs and warm kisses. Bob- based on belief

  1. Date: 9/25/2013 12:55:00 PM
    Hi Skat, hope you are well this fine evening. Enjoyed this one my friend. Your writes always make me think. Come out of your darkness for a few moment. Come, take the hand of the Dark Man and let your mind walk in Love's dream. On the other hand, do not spoil that wonderful imagination of yours. The perfect dream is something different for all of us. If my dream is not to have a happy ending i make sure that i am the one who gets hurt. I wish you the true perfect dream my friend....MIKE.

  1. Date: 9/19/2013 8:12:00 AM
    good write Skat....hugs

  1. Date: 7/15/2013 12:26:00 AM
    !!!

  1. Date: 7/7/2013 9:44:00 AM
    no! pd

  1. Date: 6/23/2013 9:38:00 PM
    Beautiful poem, I really liked this one, well done Peter

  1. Date: 4/20/2013 12:41:00 AM
    I love this one! :) such a good work!

  1. Date: 4/18/2013 1:32:00 AM
    I'd love to be in this story you speak of. A place where words are more accepted and cherished, rather than avoided so much in nowadays. Your imagination excelled in this one Skat, a pleasure to read!

  1. Date: 2/25/2013 5:31:00 PM
    This is an excellent work, thank you for your comments, i really appreciate it

  1. Date: 2/16/2013 10:05:00 PM
    Hello, my dearest Skat! Stopping by to say HI and sending you my warmest hugs! How are you? I hope you're always doing fine! I'm missing you, too! Well, I'm so happy to read this perfect poem and story of yours! I love it so much! You're so talented poet too! Thank you so much for sharing! Have a great day! love always and forever, Leonora

  1. Date: 12/3/2012 6:03:00 PM
    What a great description of what we are all doing when we post our words in hopes of making connections across time and space. Beautiful descriptive poem. Your wings have truly gapped the distance with ease.

  1. Date: 6/1/2011 8:37:00 AM
    This is lovely.. :)

  1. Date: 6/1/2011 2:21:00 AM
    Magnificent piece of work You are a brilliant poet..whats the story behind the name SKAT??

  1. Date: 5/27/2011 6:52:00 PM
    this was awesome nice job! cory

  1. Date: 5/26/2011 6:19:00 AM
    Everyone loves a happy ending...not always attainable in life, but a writer can give his or her story any ending they wish! This is a good, creative write. Some good ingredients here, and nicely put together too! Regards, Robert.

  1. Date: 3/20/2011 3:01:00 PM
    Hi, Skat, just dropping by to say hi, miss you!

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