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Too Soon, My Love - Too Soon

Neva Romaine Avatar Neva Romaine - Premium MemberPremium Member Send Soup Mail  Block poet from commenting on your poetry

Below is the poem entitled Too Soon, My Love - Too Soon which was written by poet Neva Romaine. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Too Soon, My Love - Too Soon

So, here we are again, my dear
Our wondering hearts are trembling with fear
Of the step we took in the pale moonlight
Now, beholding each other in the bright sunlight.

Remember our plan? We'll take it slow
We'll allow our hearts and love to grow
Without the pressure of passion released
Too soon - but now, where do we go?

Is it time for us now to say good bye -
Do we gather ourselves and give it a try;
Are we done, my love, and now we start
On a future that tears our love apart?

Oh, help me now to understand 
How we lost control of our senses and
That now, our passion being fulfilled
We ponder if our love is stilled.

Yes, here we are again, sweet dear,
Two wondering hearts now filled with fear
For the step we took while under the moon
Was it too soon, my love - too soon?

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  1. Date: 4/12/2014 7:44:00 PM
    Hi Neva, beautiful words... ... CONGRATULATIONS:) on having your poem featured on the soups HOME PAGE. <3 =LINDA

  1. Date: 4/12/2014 1:47:00 PM
    Beautifully written! Congratulations on being featured.

  1. Date: 4/7/2014 4:58:00 AM
    A brilliant write. Congratulations on your poem being featured this wee, neva

  1. Date: 2/15/2014 11:12:00 AM
    It is a beautiful poem, Neva. I have a contest out there! Enter! 7 G.

  1. Date: 2/14/2014 6:32:00 AM
    an amazing lovers lament. captured the passion and doubt of love seeking fulfillment under the ever influential moon. A sooth and easy read.

  1. Date: 2/10/2014 4:04:00 PM
    Beautifully written, Neva. I thoroughly enjoyed reading this. Well done. :)

  1. Date: 12/7/2012 6:00:00 AM
    Congratulations on your placement in Debbie Guzzi's "Any 5 Lines" contest Neva. Love Carol

  1. Date: 12/2/2012 6:28:00 PM
    NEVA... CONGRATULATIONS with your wonderful poem... take care~PD

  1. Date: 12/1/2012 7:23:00 AM
    Big congratulations on your winning place Neva xx

  1. Date: 11/30/2012 5:22:00 PM
    Congratulations on your very well written poem in Debbie Guzzi contest. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

    Romaine Avatar Neva Romaine
    Date: 12/1/2012 1:31:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Ms Anne Lise for your wonderful words of congratulations. I am so encouraged and I truly appreciate that you think so highly of my poem. Even though only the last four lines were allowed in the contest, it is exciting to know that Too Soon, My Love - Too Soon is so well received. Thanks again, and may God bless you always.
  1. Date: 11/30/2012 3:52:00 PM
    Guess you see how much I loved it ;) Please do enter my next 6 line contest...Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

    Romaine Avatar Neva Romaine
    Date: 12/1/2012 1:26:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Dear Ms Debbie, I thank you so much for your wonderful words and that my poem, or any parts of it, has had such a encouraging effect on you. It means so much to me and I am honored that you think so highly of Too Soon, My Love - Too Soon. I look forward trying out for your next 6 line contest. Thank you again and may God bless you always.
  1. Date: 11/21/2012 2:23:00 PM
    I'd love to have the last 4 lines of this in my contest [It's a contest which only allows 4 lines ;) just repost the last 4 lines separately and please do enter!]Happy Thanksgiving Light & Love

  1. Date: 7/18/2012 8:40:00 AM
    Congratulations on your poem making it through round one of the PoetrySoup International Poetry Contest. I wish you the best in the finals Neva. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 10/31/2011 11:24:00 AM
    Thoughtful.

  1. Date: 8/4/2011 8:10:00 AM
    Congratulations on your poetry making it through round one in the PoetrySoup International Poetry contest. I wish you the best in the final round Neva.Love, Carol

  1. Date: 7/25/2011 1:29:00 PM
    Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Neva. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 5/13/2011 12:47:00 PM
    neva.. congratulations on your wonderful feature of the week... I sure enjoyed... take care,..p.d

  1. Date: 5/9/2011 10:00:00 PM
    Hi Neva.....This is exactly the way I feel when starting a new relationship...our plan is always to take it slow..then the passion gets in there..and takes control..then you are left with what to do next...do ya take it to the next level..or do ya let it fall by the wayside?......Great heartfelt write here.....I loved it...........and could truly relate.....SugarbearUSA......:)

  1. Date: 5/9/2011 8:43:00 AM
    Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Neva. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 5/9/2011 4:21:00 AM
    Congratulations on your poem being featured this week, Neva

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