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Rain - Liquid Angel

Rain - her story is in her forms
past, present or future, same are norms

Rain – she has a complaint
dislikes being quoted as she (Rain) is FALLING
but had she not fallen
seeds would not have risen
land would have been brazen 
Life would have become extinct
such is her importance, so distinct

Rain – she has a compliment
she is loved by all – kids, young, old alike
kids joyous over floating of paper boats 
young ecstatic in love over drizzle drumming pane
old ambling in memory lane over hot coffee     
raindrops filling Life's ocean with cheerful moments
joy waves kissing Life's shores with each movement  

Rain – she is Liquid Devil
water, in excess gushing monstrously
tsunami causing devastation
consuming life all of sudden
destroying flora & fauna  
receding water spreading epidemics
drenched havoc failing normalcy academics

Rain – she is Liquid Angel
water, life to all – human, animal, trees
in womb protecting embryo
in tomb blending concrete mix 
generating electricity, axis of all motion  
offering hope to desert through oasis
frozen at Poles averting earth's nemesis
    
Rain - her story is in her forms
past, present or future, same are norms

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By Hitendra Mehta
Honorable Mention - Members Contest - "Rain, The Story " by - A Rambling Poet
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  1. Date: 1/16/2011 4:50:00 PM
    Congrats on your win as well I enjoyed your very much. Jack

  1. Date: 1/16/2011 4:47:00 PM
    Thanks so much for your congrats. Im so pleased you enjoy my poem. Jack B

  1. Date: 1/14/2011 9:33:00 AM
    Congratulations Hitendra on your win in A Rambling Poet's contest "Rain,The Story". Love, Carol

  1. Date: 1/13/2011 4:39:00 PM
    By the way, GREAT poem!

  1. Date: 1/13/2011 4:38:00 PM
    Congtatulations with your entry in the contest, Hitendra. Glad to see you on the winners list. LUv, Andrea

  1. Date: 1/13/2011 1:37:00 PM
    Congratulations on yur fine win in Constance's Contest, Hitendra! Always, Annalise

  1. Date: 1/13/2011 12:20:00 PM
    Whether Rain is complaining or complimenting, acting like a Liquid Angel or a Liquid Devil, she is certainly a memorable character in your poem, Hitendra. Congratulations on your success in the contest. Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 1/13/2011 8:46:00 AM
    Just the title alone, is clever beyond words....I love this one, Hitendra....just love it!! Congratulations!

  1. Date: 1/13/2011 8:02:00 AM
    Beautiful write my friend and congrats on your win also in the Rain, the Story contest. Love and best wishes....Ravindra....Hitendra Mehta

  1. Date: 1/13/2011 6:43:00 AM
    Congratulations on this HM win in the contest of Constance, Hitendra

  1. Date: 1/13/2011 3:26:00 AM
    opposites attract, hitendra... beautifully woven tale!! cheers for bagging a great win in the contest!! : ) nette

  1. Date: 1/12/2011 9:46:00 PM
    Congratulations on you well deserved win, dear Hitendra!!! Thank you for your comment too. LOve, Iolanda

  1. Date: 1/12/2011 8:43:00 PM
    Congrats Hitendra on your HM in the Rain Story contest with this exquisite entry my friend.. enjoy a very special honor with luv..

  1. Date: 1/12/2011 8:04:00 PM
    Very nice. Lots of congratulations for this win.

  1. Date: 1/12/2011 9:59:00 AM
    Hi there! Please enter my new contest HIGHLIGHTING poets outside the USA called Foreign Exchange, submit your best verse any form any topic. Put the contry you are writing from on the bottom. I'm looking forward to reading more of your verses. Light & Love

  1. Date: 12/30/2010 2:14:00 AM
    The biggest !WOW! ever, Good luck in the contest'' Lin~Ra

  1. Date: 12/29/2010 4:32:00 AM
    Nice personifications of Rain covering all the attributes, Hintendra, Good luck in the contest,