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Modern Day Fairy Tale

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Modern Day Fairy Tale

Through time and space we aren’t together,
But soon enough we will past this weather.
To meet one day and sigh each other’s names,
And to become one so our lives are the same.
The ocean stands between us, but our hearts still meet,
Broken laptops and internet problems are bleak
No credit on my phone, but you must hear my moan
I want you so bad right here with me,
But we are apart separated by the wicked sea
Modern day fairy tales face other foes in their place.
But we make it work because our feelings are encased.
I still go giddy simply speaking to you.
But when we ride the ocean and meet at last,
You so know I will blush deep red seeing your sexy Mexican ass.
You will laugh and make it sound so silly,
That I still can’t look at you without shaking and going dizzy.
This is good though because you know what I’m like,
I act like a school girl because you make me feel alight. 
Once more I say with feeling,
That this ocean can’t keep away our beings.

~Contest Entry~ 
Fairy Tales sponsored by Debbie Guzzi

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Broken laptops and internet problems are bleak
But we are apart separated by the wicked sea

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  1. Date: 2/5/2011 2:16:00 PM
    I'm reading a real life story in your poetry Aimee. I hope it turns out for you, the way you want it to.....:)

  1. Date: 12/31/2010 7:37:00 AM
    Interesting work..Modern day fairy tales are happening quite often..Sara

  1. Date: 12/27/2010 12:33:00 PM
    Been there.