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GLOOPIER GLOOP

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Below is the poem entitled GLOOPIER GLOOP which was written by poet Joe Maverick. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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GLOOPIER GLOOP

I was finding it ''hard myself to stir'' so with inspiration i did confer..

OH!..dang confound..its writers block! so what for an antidote.? i shall

add more stock..! an input of chros, with celer and cede indeed.! that will

really flux the plot i do (soupose:) now...then..verber the radix..when..!

plop..splat.. right!  in  my  eye.! a burning liquid alubi, oh.!bother this

stew will it ever be eytem.?..hold.on a juxta minute..! ceno cogn hibit

vert..! and it..it.. seems to go..! yess i sense more rhythm..with..that..that,

..soupy flow..!

copyright Joe Maverick 2012
amended 29th 2nd 2012


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  1. Date: 10/24/2012 2:51:00 PM
    A tasty write indeed, Joe. I was searching your past writes and this looked interesting - and it was in a weird sort of way. Great imagination. Love, daver

  1. Date: 5/25/2012 6:38:00 AM
    "writers block"...I'm sure yours won't stay with you for long, Joe! At times it is best to let the bowl sit, then skim off the gloop and enjoy your soup! Best wishes to you and yours! Love, Mikki

  1. Date: 4/13/2012 6:55:00 AM
    Revisiting a fun oldie of yours. GOOD MORNING> I have been up since 3 a.m when hubbie got up to pee. hahaha. I hate when I cannot go back to sleep!!! HAve a good day. Luv, Andrea

  1. Date: 3/13/2012 6:24:00 PM
    Congrats on your winning work..Sara

  1. Date: 3/13/2012 6:10:00 PM
    Wonderful write,Joe.Congratulations on your win..Thanks for stopping by.....

  1. Date: 3/13/2012 5:25:00 PM
    Congratulations Joe on your win. An interesting bit of gloop. Thanks for your comment on mine. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 3/13/2012 1:27:00 PM
    congrats Joe on a super second place win luv for a wonderful write .. feel better...

  1. Date: 3/13/2012 11:34:00 AM
    Congrats with your well deserved win,Joe..Take Care,Arild

  1. Date: 3/13/2012 5:48:00 AM
    Congratulations for your win in P.D.'s get well soup contest Joe. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 3/13/2012 2:22:00 AM
    Congratultions Joe, nicley done. xx

  1. Date: 3/12/2012 11:10:00 PM
    JOE., , Congratulations! with your wonderful soup poem. I'm feeling much better now. LOL... except the folks around me. I got Nate and my granddaughter sick. SHAME ON ME! THANK YOU FOR SUPPORTING my contest ;-) I much enjoyed your entry, ~ always*PD

  1. Date: 4/19/2011 4:01:00 PM
    a great piece of fine poetry Joe

  1. Date: 1/6/2011 6:40:00 AM
    Glue holding it in..I guess what you really need is a liquid solvent..That would be smelly though..Those times to come us and then like a lightening bolt from the sky a thought, a sight, someone says something, an article read,etc. then the thoughts just tumble forth..Thanks for the kind comments on my work..In my inner being, I will always feel the effects of my mother's death and being adopted but it all worked out for good..Sara

    Maverick Avatar Joe Maverick
    Date: 10/5/2011 7:29:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Sara, i just noticed the very heart warming comments you left on Gloopier soup (a while ago) you are a wonderfull person to converse with and to have as a friend...God bless Joe.
  1. Date: 1/2/2011 7:58:00 AM
    Superb Joe.. luv the play on words especially the (soupose).. great imagination luv.. ..should do well in the contest but much good luck to u..my friend... enjoyed that awesome title too.. thankxx for always commenting on my poetry.. means so much luv..

  1. Date: 12/30/2010 9:15:00 PM
    very gloopy, Joe. gloopy, soupy and fun! Luv, Andrea

  1. Date: 12/30/2010 5:07:00 PM
    Always loving your poetry Joe..,, enjoyed your poem. Stopping by to wish you lots of cheers & joy this comming new year.. May you always find new ways to share your talent and imagination with us here at the soup. Happy new year to you and your family,, God bless,.miss.p.d.

  1. Date: 12/28/2010 1:01:00 PM
    funny write with a side of souper douper word play!!

  1. Date: 12/27/2010 6:57:00 PM
    enjoyed this Joe, profound and very interesting. Harry

  1. Date: 12/27/2010 1:13:00 PM
    Oh now this was terrific read Joe.Thanks for your kind comment on my poem.Teresa

  1. Date: 12/26/2010 9:40:00 AM
    It is humor and experiment, it is courage and encouragement ... I found it interesting to read.