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  1. Date: 11/23/2011 12:44:00 PM
    Congratulations on your win in this contest today Fabiyas. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 11/23/2011 9:31:00 AM
    You took us all for a ride Fabiyas. Well done. Congratulations

  1. Date: 11/11/2011 11:00:00 AM
    Like a vine he twisted...with a thrill he'd never...small pits in the road did jerk him with the bike..rain water pits the bike...[but a speed reduced OR but a reduced speed both] the greatest pleasure hide..

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    Date: 11/11/2011 9:45:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks a lot Debbie.A slight modification is done.
  1. Date: 11/3/2011 12:58:00 AM
    Congratulations on the win with this lovely poem, Fabiyas

  1. Date: 11/2/2011 11:43:00 AM
    Wow, your pome's last two lines sum up the message so well, Fabiyas. When I was younger, we used to ride our bicycles through a state forest, sometimes going airborn after going over a tree root. I surely can relate to taking risks for the purpose of finding the greatest pleasures. Congrats on your win in Brian's contest. Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 11/2/2011 9:38:00 AM
    Congrats Fabiyas on HM for this exquisite entry so unique my friend..enjoy honor with luv..

  1. Date: 11/2/2011 8:25:00 AM
    Reminds me of my childhood when my bike and I were one. See one, see the other. Congratulations on your HM in Brian's contest Fabiyas

  1. Date: 11/2/2011 5:38:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win in Brian's "1-14 any theme" contest Fabiyas. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 4/12/2011 10:22:00 AM
    Fabiyas, Enjoyed reading your exciting poem..Riding the bike down the hill through puddles and raindrops...Great moral at the end..Thanks for entering my contest..Sara

  1. Date: 1/5/2011 5:07:00 AM
    Congratulations Fabiyas on your win in the "Toyland" contest by Linda-Marie. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 1/4/2011 5:00:00 AM
    Congratulation on this well deserved win in the contest of Linda, Fabiyas

  1. Date: 1/3/2011 10:14:00 PM
    congratulations, Fabiyas!

  1. Date: 1/3/2011 5:18:00 PM
    Congrats FABIYAS on your success in my Toyland contest... my winners list just posted tonight luv...

  1. Date: 1/1/2011 11:12:00 AM
    Congrats FABIYAS on your win in my TOYLAND contest with this wonderful entry luv.. HNY..

  1. Date: 12/26/2010 7:23:00 PM
    Hello Fabiyas, Beautiful asnd so well penned. Lov it As Always, Shar

  1. Date: 12/25/2010 7:50:00 PM
    Thank you Dr.Ram.I think I have rectified it now.

  1. Date: 12/25/2010 6:06:00 AM
    no,Fabiyas I am not from kerala why do u ask...

  1. Date: 12/25/2010 4:17:00 AM
    I think you should give once over to the rhyme scheme of the sonnet, Fabiyas. merry christmas

  1. Date: 12/24/2010 12:50:00 PM
    Beautiful poem.I liked the ending very much.

  1. Date: 12/24/2010 8:24:00 AM
    There is one single risk - life. This is evidenced by the one who is born each year and will be born. Blessing for you!