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when things lose

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when things lose

When nights becomes sleepless
When mind becomes thoughtless
When heart becomes emotionless

Nasty nights when fall,
With hardly anybody to call,
O god! Be stars shining
To shine my darkness

Mystery mind when find,
No one to be kind,
O god! Be right route
To concentrate my thoughts

Hasty heart when rise,
With the world which cries,
O god! Be perfect parent
To love me till I die



                      by:-
                      Vrushani Thaker

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  1. Date: 3/10/2011 5:46:00 AM

    Excellent poetry Vrushani. Love, Carol I have sent you a soupmail

  1. Date: 1/28/2011 8:47:00 AM

    This is remarkable poetry Mr Thaker, keep on keeping on!

  1. Date: 1/11/2011 8:01:00 AM

    I am having a contest featuring poets from outside the USA please add your skill, let us FEEL what it's like to live where you live? Light & Love

  1. Date: 12/22/2010 5:01:00 AM

    This is quite emotional and devotional at the same time, Vrushani

  1. Date: 12/21/2010 11:29:00 PM

    enjoyed this awesome poem Vrushani, Harry