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A Boatman Recalls and Repents

From the canal bank market to markets,
A boat man had propelled with a long pole.
A mat roofed boat,
Full of goods and intrigues,
Gets visible with
The high tide of recollections.

The boiling rice on the kerosene stove
And a blinking night lamp
Boil and blink again.
He plucked tender coconuts
From the grove nearby,
When its owner had been fast asleep.
He had shattered a widow’s solitude
On the bank of  Kanoli canal.
He had peeped into secrecy
Of the bathing village damsels……..

The moist events after events,
The boat man recalls and repents.
The roads became kings,
The boat decay tied,
And the boat man a wrinkled storyteller.
Often,he looks up the sky 
For the rain washing out all.

FABIYAS M V




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  1. Date: 2/12/2012 8:59:00 AM

    luv this one.canals and rains bring me back memories of basin road and broadway.... lovely piece of crafted potrait..

  1. Date: 11/28/2011 6:32:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s contest FAB. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 11/26/2011 2:01:00 PM

    Congratulations on your win. I really enjoyed Reading your poem! Lori

  1. Date: 11/24/2011 8:49:00 AM

    Nicely written Fabiyas. Congratulations on your win

  1. Date: 11/23/2011 11:44:00 PM

    FAB, ;-) stopping by to wish you and everyone a happy THANKSGIVING! Also to congratulate you in my "any poem goes contest`" Have yourself a wonderful and lovely holiday. God Bless,.. p.d.

  1. Date: 11/12/2011 6:00:00 PM

    time and tide wait for no man...light & love [read my sestinas and let meknow what you think?]

  1. Date: 4/21/2011 4:33:00 PM

    Way to go Fabiyas, Congratulations on your success in the winner circle. Agape, Moses

  1. Date: 4/21/2011 1:06:00 PM

    Congratulations on the sixth place win in the contest, Fabiyas

  1. Date: 4/21/2011 11:38:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win in the contest Fabiyas. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 4/21/2011 11:20:00 AM

    Intriguing ending here. Most enjoyed the vivid details and imagery. Congratulations on your win in Debbie's contest!

  1. Date: 4/21/2011 7:25:00 AM

    Wow, the whole picture emerges before the eyes. Many warm congrats for this terrific write

  1. Date: 4/21/2011 7:22:00 AM

    Congrats FABIYAS on your excellent win in Debbie's contest with this exceptional entry my friend.. another awesome write from your creative genius ..luv.. enjoy and wishing u a very blessed and Happy Easter celebration..luv..

  1. Date: 1/13/2011 11:36:00 AM

    Congratulations Fabiyas on your win in "Annalise's Contest". Love, Carol

  1. Date: 1/11/2011 10:24:00 AM

    Wow. What an amazing poem. Congratulations on your win in the contest. It is most deserved. I will have to read more of your work. Best wishes, Deb

  1. Date: 1/11/2011 10:22:00 AM

    :) Thanks for supporting the contest, Fabiyas. Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 1/9/2011 7:21:00 PM

    fabulous use fo inages! congrst on the big win, fabiyas.. :) nette

  1. Date: 1/9/2011 10:38:00 AM

    Fabiyas, beautiful job for an honored top ten win, "Congratulations!" Agape, Moses

  1. Date: 1/9/2011 9:55:00 AM

    Congrats FABIYAS on your wonderful win in Audrey's great contest with this excellent entry my friend.. enjoy another top ten victory with luv..

  1. Date: 1/9/2011 6:25:00 AM

    Congratulations on this well deserved win in the contest of Audrey, Fabiyas

  1. Date: 1/9/2011 3:56:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win in the contest Fabiyas ;-) WN

  1. Date: 1/8/2011 10:21:00 PM

    He knew he needed forgiveness which is to his credit. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 1/8/2011 7:53:00 PM

    Thanks for supporting my contest, Fabiyas! Congratulations! Love, Audrey

  1. Date: 1/8/2011 7:48:00 PM

    I remember this one so well, Fabiyas. It made quite an impression on me. Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 12/23/2010 5:54:00 PM

    Very descriptive and expressive work..I enjoyed the story of the work..I am glad that I chose this one to read this eve..I was so delighted that you stopped by and commented on my work..Sara

  1. Date: 12/21/2010 4:12:00 PM

    a poem of hope, Fabi--- very much enjoyed the story! a lot of fun! keep writing!!! jimbo

  1. Date: 12/21/2010 11:50:00 AM

    Style reminds me of Korean poetry, but I think there koluturen halo of Christian kultura.An original alloy (boat), the rain .. the sky.

  1. Date: 12/20/2010 8:07:00 PM

    Your poem made me recall the ferryboat man over the River Styx in Greek mythology, Fabiyas. Perhaps this was not your intent as your discription of the village and its atmosphere were quite striking, but it was like a journey (for me) to the other side. Deep and beautiful, my friend. Thanks for your comments. Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 12/20/2010 7:01:00 PM

    Written so delicately and so beautifully FABIYAS.. a tale of sheer survival and repentance as well for trying to survive.. enjoyed the images of the poem along with the vivid descriptive quality my friend.. a truly intense read..with luv..

  1. Date: 12/20/2010 6:54:00 PM

    Fabiyas what breathtaking imagery, I could visualise every line.. Beautiful write ;)

  1. Date: 12/20/2010 9:58:00 AM

    flowing with ragged imagery about the insudtrial age, fabiyas... wonderful!.. nette