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Young and Crazy n' Love

I feel so crazy in love with you
i opened my heart and gave it to you.
when your online i notice
and when you dont call i feel hopeless.
Never a stalker towards you boy
but you're the only one whose ever brought the joy.
back into my life
but i had to think twice
before i let your words control my mind.
And i know this might sound crazy
i thought about having your baby.
our whole future lies ahead
so i took that thought and now its dead.
Now you talk about wedding rings
though we.re only sixteen
But i am older so i have to ask
do you think that this will last
i never thought i will cry front of a male
but your words are so powerful, you broke that shell.
You say you love and i do too
but you dont know how much i do.
our parents are on some romeo and juliet type stuff
but i think we.re older enough
to see what we.re doing because
we maybe young
blinded and dumb
but we.re crazy n' love ?







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  1. Date: 4/6/2011 2:47:00 PM

    Been there and done that..My advice is to wait and get an education..It is an enjoyable poem written with passion..Sara

  1. Date: 12/18/2010 9:02:00 AM

    Dear Malika, I enjoyed reading this, "Free Verse" and I must admit, I am a parent and being "crazy in love" can be wonderful...with respect, and caring for each other. Blessings, peace and joy, Love, audrey