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Earths Beautiful Flow
translucent waters in meandering journey ancient paths taken
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Eiken Laan
Date: 1/7/2011 8:51:00 AM
Beautiful haiku James, really love the ancient paths taken.....
deb radke
Date: 12/16/2010 11:01:00 AM
I get the feeling you may be what some call an 'old soul'. At least, that's the feel I have been getting from some of your poetry. This is wonderful. Visual and well-written. ps. soup mail to you re thank you
Mary Meade Stephenson
Date: 12/16/2010 9:24:00 AM
A superbly crafted haiku you have penned here James. Thanks so much for sharing and for taking the time to read mine and your always nice comments are deeply appreciated! Hope you have a wonderfully blessed day~Mary
Wilma Neels
Date: 12/16/2010 4:36:00 AM
James, another beauty from you and so profound too.. Guess who is on holiday?? Hope your Thursday is a good one ;)
Sharon Ruebel
Date: 12/15/2010 11:05:00 AM
Hello James, Such a mellow and beautiful read....Love it As Always, Shar
Carol Sunshine Brown
Date: 12/15/2010 6:27:00 AM
Thank you for sharing your heart with us through your poetry here at PoetrySoup James. My time for reading and commenting will be short until after the New Year. So, today I send a wish from my house to yours. Have a Joyous Holiday and a Happy New Year. Please remember the sick and hungry in your prayers daily. Do all you can to help in anyway you can. Love and blessing, Carol and Family (Your smile can warm a heart)
binibining P.iNk
Date: 12/14/2010 11:34:00 PM
this is beautiful James-- I really like how you connect this to the past-- :) -- nikko :)
harry horsman
Date: 12/14/2010 7:42:00 PM
All the way down to those beautiful Loch's, James, love this such profoundness. Harry
Autumn Page
Date: 12/14/2010 7:39:00 PM
i really like this! earth is a beautiful place to be, and provides new beauty to witness everyday! i am so very thankful! thanks for providing great poetry to read today! nice work.
James Peranteau
Date: 12/14/2010 5:11:00 PM
Yesssss; this is definately good dear Sir ! Great write Mr. Fraser ! You are the poet for sure ! And I am sorry if I have offended you in any way. much love, james
Sara Kendrick
Date: 12/14/2010 4:05:00 PM
Good one..Ancient paths taken..Excellent work..Sara
Francine Roberts
Date: 12/14/2010 3:55:00 PM
lovely haiku, so peaceful, good luck in the contest James
Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 12/14/2010 3:09:00 PM
The streams and rivers have been meandering in these ancient paths for many years, James. Such a vivid and thought-provoking image that recollects the passage of time. Best wishes in Rick's contest! Love, Carolyn
Michael J. Falotico
Date: 12/14/2010 3:03:00 PM
AH nice flow and vision to this... exellent my friend...
Doris Culverhouse
Date: 12/14/2010 2:53:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your work tonight. the river has to take the low route via gravity...enjoyed
Dr.Ram Mehta
Date: 12/14/2010 2:48:00 PM
Lovely write on the flowing water with good images, James
