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  1. Date: 12/21/2010 2:23:00 PM
    Dear Light and LOVE, Deborah, I Love Haiku and this being a series is so Great Superb Write LOVE, YOUR Liege ALWAYS... HG - SOUP MAIL CALL (again)

  1. Date: 12/21/2010 9:52:00 AM
    Dear Light And LOVE, Deborah Superb Haiku Series an Excellant transformation from the cold of life to the heat of Passion I bow to YOUR POETIC genious, offering YOU theGolden Pen of POETRY LOVE YOU ALWAYS, YOUR Liege...HG - SOUP MAIL CALL

  1. Date: 12/21/2010 6:19:00 AM
    Congratulations a beautiful chain of Haikus that stand alone and work together well, painting beautiful inspirational pictures of nature... Delightful, well done!

  1. Date: 12/17/2010 10:55:00 AM
    Congrats Deborah on your well deserved win-kashinath

  1. Date: 12/17/2010 8:27:00 AM
    Congratulations on this well deserved third place win, Deb

  1. Date: 12/17/2010 8:22:00 AM
    our Queen of haiku truly knows what haikus are all about!! Congratulations on your winning series....some of us are still learning from your stunning examples!! :)

  1. Date: 12/17/2010 7:55:00 AM
    Great use of images with the deer and the dolphins, Deb. Congratulations on your high placement in Rick's haiku contest. Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 12/17/2010 7:24:00 AM
    Congrats Debbie on your big win in Rick's contest with this exciting entry on flowing water.. enjoy with luv..

  1. Date: 12/16/2010 10:02:00 PM
    loved these first time around, congrats Debbie. Harry

  1. Date: 12/16/2010 9:54:00 PM
    OH, how did I miss these? And I see you won really high with them. Way to go, Deb. My favorite is the last one. I love dolphins and it's just beautiful. LUv, Andrea

  1. Date: 12/16/2010 9:50:00 PM
    I love this one ~ great triple ~ CONGRATS to you, you winner you~check your placement!!!!God bless you CHIC-A-DEE~~~~Rick

  1. Date: 12/16/2010 6:15:00 AM
    This is not a true haiku for I have attempted to make a single image of flowing water from 3 place images of where the water flowed from..yet the unifying image is the flowing water ;)

  1. Date: 12/15/2010 10:38:00 PM
    A beautiful Haiku chain each standing alone just as much... Love your imagery used and the references to nature, there is something relaxing from the soothing waters of waterfalls and the shards of light that dance aongst them, but your first stanza makes me think of tears shed and the relief that passes with them - "blessing of the Light" with your capitalising the "L" of "Light", makes me think of faith, hope and prayer answered, miracles and all things born of God. So much more within...

  1. Date: 12/15/2010 7:53:00 AM
    thankxx TEACH .. we appreciate the loving thoughts conveyed ..received today.. with luv.. again good luck in the contest by Rick with this rare beauty entry .... pupil...

  1. Date: 12/15/2010 5:00:00 AM
    Thank you for sharing your heart with us through your poetry here at PoetrySoup Deborah. My time for reading and commenting will be short until after the New Year. So, today I send a wish from my house to yours. Have a Joyous Holiday and a Happy New Year. Please remember the sick and hungry in your prayers daily. Do all you can to help in anyway you can. Love and blessing, Carol and Family (Your smile can warm a heart)

  1. Date: 12/15/2010 1:07:00 AM
    Deborah, this has something very clear, relaxed, and dynamic about it at the same time. Amazing combination! Thanks by the way for your response to my blog, it was very much appreciated.

  1. Date: 12/14/2010 9:39:00 PM
    Heya Debbie. I really dig these haiku....and to think that you went against your old rule of being careful not to have too many actions happen in one haiku. These still came out as great haiku regardless.

  1. Date: 12/14/2010 7:29:00 PM
    awesome, such imagery. Harry

  1. Date: 12/14/2010 2:07:00 PM
    Beautiful images to create this wonder of our world, Deb

  1. Date: 12/14/2010 12:37:00 PM
    Awesome one Debbie.. good luck in Rick's contest.. so many different versions of the flowing water contest... this should be at the top of the heap on winners row luv.. SOUP MAIL...