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Sore to My Conclusion

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Sore to My Conclusion

Mesmerizing. Fierce fully aggravating.
Sinfully off this guard
Narrowly beyond tracks
Heart-aching, credit-crunching.
Stomach-turning, memory-converging.
Temperance.
Control. Mind-bugging soul 
Cracks, strokes, tears, burns
The butterflies churn
Nerve-racking. Emotion-bedazzling
Ambience comely.

Done. No more.
Appetite so ended
Thoughts and ways never blended
Sharp. Frail. Obscure.
Gross. Beguiled. Unsure.
Lack-luster, deafening throbs
Shocked!
Spun. Tossed. Tangled. Wrinkled.
Lofty – nay, ever sinking.
Gully-deep, well-emptied
Blanked!
Completely darkened.

Sore. Wrecked. Crowded.
Dead sounds chanting
Coarse noise gallivanting 
Bereaved from queer trials
Saddened from down-turned madness
Torn.
Debunked, dislodged from gaiety 
Misconstrued from onset.
Shallow. Fallen. Hopeless.
Sure,
For the very last of time.

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  1. Date: 12/14/2010 11:11:00 PM
    Thanks alot Linda-Marie. I really do appreciate and i'm looking forward to having a swell time!

  1. Date: 12/14/2010 8:07:00 PM
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