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Darkbodied

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Darkbodied

Born through a child I was-
Fathered by none-
Raised by strangers-
Growing inside me-
An ineffable danger-
Entering life behind a closed door-
I strained to breathe-
Is this living?-
Aboded in a fleshly tomb-
I must be freed-
Cannot stay-
Though Ha'lel came for me-  
I have seen his revolving exit-

 

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  1. Date: 2/19/2012 12:24:00 PM
    Michael,, Congratulations on your poem featured this week...have a Nice one...pd

  1. Date: 2/13/2012 7:56:00 AM
    Very nice work. Congratulations on being featured by Poetry Soup this week...............S.Ronthorpe.

  1. Date: 2/13/2012 6:46:00 AM
    Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Michael. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 7/25/2011 2:12:00 PM
    Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Michael. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 5/22/2011 10:36:00 AM
    Congrats on your beautiful poem featured this week. I wish you many successes. -Mohammad

  1. Date: 5/16/2011 6:13:00 PM
    Congratulations on your poem being featured this week, Michael

  1. Date: 5/16/2011 1:30:00 PM
    michael, congratulations on your featured write this week . Love, Carol

  1. Date: 2/27/2011 8:15:00 AM
    Congrats on your poem featured this week. Lovely and intense. Well done! Love Shirley

  1. Date: 2/21/2011 2:04:00 PM
    Congratulations Michael on your wonderful poetry being featured this week on PoetrySoup. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 12/25/2010 3:13:00 PM
    Congratulations Michael on your featured poetry this week. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 12/22/2010 11:57:00 AM
    ouch Michael; this is so intense. Great write full of pain...Congrats on this feature...Lay

  1. Date: 12/16/2010 4:41:00 PM
    I sent you ..your verse Ac'cursed in Soup Mail with just a slighty different page layout & spelling correction..did you get it? fret....maybe you'd like my Rain's Fall ? Light & Love

  1. Date: 12/15/2010 9:34:00 AM
    good write about your plight. My heart goes out to you

  1. Date: 12/13/2010 12:04:00 PM
    I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Michael. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. You can look to the left side of the main page and find lots of information on PoetrySoup including contests by members of PoetrySoup and contests by the PoetrySoup site also. Love, Carol