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Life

It is an ocean
through which we swim
It is a glass of nectar
filled up to the brim

It is a lesson
taught by the Lord
Beware, it's fragile
yet as strong as a sword

These days man
underestimate its worth
Many people die without their dreams fulfilled
so fulfill your dreams from birth

It beholds many bounties
that are hidden from you
To see these wonders
needed, is a different point of view

If you follow your dreams
and use your mind
peace and the meaning
of life you will find

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  1. Date: 12/15/2010 9:37:00 AM
    Great write! I enjoyed the read.

  1. Date: 12/14/2010 2:26:00 PM
    Thank you for your nice feedback!

  1. Date: 12/13/2010 12:06:00 PM
    I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Krishna. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. You can look to the left side of the main page and find lots of information on PoetrySoup including contests by members of PoetrySoup and contests by the PoetrySoup site also. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 12/12/2010 6:10:00 PM
    Hi krishna.I like your view of life expressed here and the diifferent descriptive lines you've used..And your message is true and very inspirational.I have no real dreams now.But no regrets either,for have managed to understand and find peace within, if not ny handling of my life would be very different.These words of yours come from your heart and I want to thank you for sharing them with us.Love June(Sylvia)

  1. Date: 12/12/2010 5:12:00 PM
    Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed reading your creative write tonight... hope your time on Soup will be fun and filled with sharing.. check out the contests too.. good luck with luv..

  1. Date: 12/12/2010 2:32:00 PM
    Very creative anf interesting write on life, Krishna