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A LOVE COMPLETE

He helps her across the street
That their love for each other is complete
Their hair is gray
But their love was never taken away
To me thats true love
That they fit like a glove
I want someone to be with until I am old and gray
And that he helps me anyway
They seemed to be together forever
No matter the day or weather
They are always together forever

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  1. Date: 12/28/2010 8:57:00 PM

    I've had similar thoughts,when I see elderly married couples that have been together for so long. I really like what you say in lines 3,4, 5, 6. Thanks for sharing that. Also thank you for your comment on my poem. Glad you enjoyed it.

  1. Date: 12/11/2010 7:09:00 PM

    I really enjoyed your poem, that is love