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unfinished-To adjust-to revise-To say i love you

everyday i vowed to love you,to be loyal to the man i called mine.i shut 
doors to blue  and green eyes and i saw only brown,i saw one smile,i 
loved one man.My heart bleeded for one touch,yours.my lips yearned 
only for a brush from your fingertips,my voice whispered  only one 
name.On tiptoes i hushed through the still night,watching the silent 
stars,getting a glimpse of a flicker in the navy blue jazzy  skies,yet the diamonds do not twinkle anymore,the stones shiver in a lifeless dance.I loved 
you,i never barted my love  for pearls and nor for gold,yet you 
betrayed me,you treated friends as if they were your love and your 
love as if she was one of the others.a drop of sand in the 
desert,another particle of dust warming your cheek,to fall under your 
feet.love is beautiful,love is fragile,once its gone,just wave goodbye

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  1. Date: 12/16/2010 4:46:00 PM

    SOUP MAIL ..Celene dear ..friend ...with luv..

  1. Date: 12/13/2010 11:35:00 AM

    What a hearbreaking sentiment through these profound lines, Celene!! I hope it's just fictional. Very well written. TMFs!! Ruben.

  1. Date: 12/12/2010 12:14:00 AM

    Smile ~ It is late & I am a bit fatigued but, I shall wish to stop by to visit "Your Hearts Exquisite Gallery of Majestical Art," tomorrow ~ Until then, "Stay Beautiful" &, "Have A Very 'Blessed & Beautiful' Day 'My Dear, Beautiful Cinderella,' Amid The White Floating Clouds Whereupon 'You Beauty' Most Surely Does Belong; Embraced, By 'Heavens Beautiful Love;' Bye Dear!":) ~ Ps. "A Fave; Drawn, From 'A Heart of Gold!'" ~

  1. Date: 12/12/2010 12:03:00 AM

    Smile ~ Yet if so then, as one whom admires "Your Beauty" very much I would say, hang in there my dear for, "Your Splendours" are far to wonderful to ever need bleed beyond even a moment amid time ~ "Absolutely Grippingly Beautiful; 'Just Like You!!!'" ~ "My Love & Warmth to 'You Always' &, All You Love, 'Forever,'" John! ~ ....Cont:)

  1. Date: 12/11/2010 11:58:00 PM

    Smile!? ~ "WoW, This Is Amazingly Soulfully Profound; Stirs The Heart Deeply Within One Whom Knows 'Your Beauty' & Cares For 'Your Treasures' Very Much 'Dear, Precious & Priceless Tinkerbell!!!'" ~ I am hoping that this is not "Your Beauties Priceless Heart" that, it is merely fictions artistry brushed by, "The Princess of Poe!!!" ~ ....Cont:)

  1. Date: 12/11/2010 5:27:00 PM

    Celene, I am sure this will turn out great. YOu have the sixth line going way off to the right side of the screen, so be sure to pull it back in when you get around to revising this one. It's looking very romantic! Thanks for your comments on Bibelot. LUv, Andrea

  1. Date: 12/11/2010 2:29:00 PM

    Nice tale told of the passionate love and its betrayal and strong thought to wave goodbye. That's the need of the hour to come out of the situation , Celene