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When It Ends

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When It Ends

When our hearts beat as one
I know that its you i have won
And your eyes shine like the sun
Remaining this way until we are done

So right now i can see the ray of light
Its coming through your bedroom window
When you answer the door i take flight
Only to you do my feelings ever show

Just as i walk in you embrace me 
The hug is like one never before
Only our love can set me free
And i feel this as i walk in the door

Yet its new every time we touch
Ecstacy until we are fulfilled
Girl i probably love you too much
But its what my soul has willed

And when that day comes pleasure ends
The gleam in your eye is what time mends
I can only hope that you and i remain friends
As the beating of our hearts as one ascends

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  1. Date: 12/11/2010 3:24:00 PM
    Well expressed thoughts you have penned on When it ends, Cody