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The banking rate

The banking rate 
is like a young lady
one day low and promising
next day
the value rises with several per cent
and a question 
at the dance floor 
by the river will be  
can I get a loan?

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  1. Date: 12/9/2010 9:58:00 AM

    loved it!

  1. Date: 12/9/2010 5:55:00 AM

    Thank you for sharing your poetry today Haldor. I enjoyed reading it and I wish you a wonderful day. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 12/9/2010 3:21:00 AM

    The never ending apprehensive question. Nice write and read.