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Dancing Ballerina

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    Cloaked by Soft feathers     elegant  swan pirouettes      splash in calm beauty



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                                 Dedicated to Constance La France
 
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                                       For of A Rambling Poet


                      (Contest Sponsored by Constance La Fra nce)   00ps i missed the contest.. Slow coach Me :)

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  1. Zzzzz Avatar
    Zzzzz Zzzzz
    Date: 5/26/2011 11:38:00 AM
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    Missed the contest??? Pity...I think this could have been a top contender!

    Crescent Avatar Celene Crescent Date: 5/27/2011 12:19:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks,i really write for the fun of it,i took part only in one contest,since i've been here,and i'm glad i did..other than that i never entered another,this was going to be the second,but i wasn't in time,but its ok,there were many amazing poet friends competing for it here,thanks for stopping by :)and for reading.
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    Robert Pettit
    Date: 2/4/2011 6:38:00 AM
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    Not much written here, but it conveys beautiful descriptiveness. Nice write.
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    Adeleke Adeite
    Date: 12/29/2010 8:38:00 AM
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    wow, wonderful!
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    John Rhinem
    Date: 12/14/2010 11:09:00 AM
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    Smile ~ Very lovely painting as Always &, I hope that "Your Brightness" is doing well ~ "My Love & Warmth to 'You Always' &, All You Love, 'Forever,'" John!:) ~ Smile, allow myself to now go read part two of this jewel my dear.... ~
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    John Rhinem
    Date: 12/14/2010 11:04:00 AM
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    Smile ~ It seems as though "Your Beauties" emotions are somewhat poured & ablaze amid this poes moment "My 'Dear, Precious & Priceless Tinkerbell!!!'" ~ "Thank You," as always for "Your Treasures" kind coms &, this place shall not be quite as bright without "Your True Radiance" here to Grace its walls but, wherever "Your Beauty" may Glow; blessed are they to behold, such immaculate light, born, from deep inside ~ ....Cont:)

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    James Fraser
    Date: 12/11/2010 1:41:00 PM
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    Beautiful poetry Celene, a delightful read this Saturday evening >> James :)
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    Ruben O.
    Date: 12/11/2010 1:33:00 PM
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    I love the third line!!!!!!!!!!!! ; )
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    Noel Villarosa
    Date: 12/11/2010 1:47:00 AM
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    Very interesting to read, as swan prefers mild or cool climates and some swans only paddle with one leg, but still graceful to see afloat in water. (^_^) Noel.
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    FABIYAS M V
    Date: 12/10/2010 5:23:00 AM
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    Nice scene you have painted,Celene.Sweet piece for the contest.
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    DE R
    Date: 12/9/2010 9:58:00 AM
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    Very beautiful description, Celene:) I love swans so much! Good luck in the contest! Hugs, Emilia:)
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    Phyllis Babcock
    Date: 12/9/2010 7:58:00 AM
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    This is a wonderful description. Good luck in the contest. God Bless Phyl
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    Carolyn Devonshire
    Date: 12/9/2010 7:17:00 AM
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    Ah, the layout looks like swan feathers to me. Lovely touch, Celene! I responded to your Soup mail. Wasn't online late last night. Love, Carolyn
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    Linda-Marie SweetHeart
    Date: 12/9/2010 6:13:00 AM
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    SOUP MAIL..Celene..luv..
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    Celene Crescent
    Date: 12/8/2010 10:38:00 PM
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    dear Car. .i made up my mind to enter contest,maybe i should. .but have to check if entry is open :)
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    James Peranteau
    Date: 12/8/2010 6:23:00 PM
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    This is such a soft serene poem dear poet, it "pirouettes" from the page right (write) into mine mind ! Great poetry ! much love, james
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    Linda-Marie SweetHeart
    Date: 12/8/2010 5:11:00 PM
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    Well this is beautiful Celene and I picture Constance in this line as she is a dancer as well as a poet.. she will totally luv as I do the exquisite beauty of this entry ..good luck my dear friend.. with luv..
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    Dr.Ram Mehta
    Date: 12/8/2010 4:52:00 PM
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    Nice tributes and attributes to Constance, celene
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    Celene Crescent
    Date: 12/8/2010 1:59:00 PM
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    Yes Car,I read she loves to dance ,she's spiritual,loves swans too. .I dnt think i'm entering contest though,i dnt know,dear,yet im happy i got inspired,hugs
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    Michael J. Falotico
    Date: 12/8/2010 1:53:00 PM
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    I love this form , and your poetry as well...always Michael
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    Carolyn Devonshire
    Date: 12/8/2010 1:23:00 PM
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    Did you know Constance is a dancer, Celene? I hope she reads this monoku because it seems to describe her so well. Love, Carolyn
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    Sara Kendrick
    Date: 12/8/2010 12:53:00 PM
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    Reads like a winner to me..I am so glad that I stopped and read this one this afternoon..Good luck in the contest..I was encouraged by your comments on my work..Sara


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