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  1. Date: 5/26/2011 11:38:00 AM
    Missed the contest??? Pity...I think this could have been a top contender!

    Crescent Avatar Celene Crescent
    Date: 5/27/2011 12:19:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks,i really write for the fun of it,i took part only in one contest,since i've been here,and i'm glad i did..other than that i never entered another,this was going to be the second,but i wasn't in time,but its ok,there were many amazing poet friends competing for it here,thanks for stopping by :)and for reading.
  1. Date: 2/4/2011 6:38:00 AM
    Not much written here, but it conveys beautiful descriptiveness. Nice write.

  1. Date: 12/29/2010 8:38:00 AM
    wow, wonderful!

  1. Date: 12/14/2010 11:09:00 AM
    Smile ~ Very lovely painting as Always &, I hope that "Your Brightness" is doing well ~ "My Love & Warmth to 'You Always' &, All You Love, 'Forever,'" John!:) ~ Smile, allow myself to now go read part two of this jewel my dear.... ~

  1. Date: 12/14/2010 11:04:00 AM
    Smile ~ It seems as though "Your Beauties" emotions are somewhat poured & ablaze amid this poes moment "My 'Dear, Precious & Priceless Tinkerbell!!!'" ~ "Thank You," as always for "Your Treasures" kind coms &, this place shall not be quite as bright without "Your True Radiance" here to Grace its walls but, wherever "Your Beauty" may Glow; blessed are they to behold, such immaculate light, born, from deep inside ~ ....Cont:)

  1. Date: 12/11/2010 1:41:00 PM
    Beautiful poetry Celene, a delightful read this Saturday evening >> James :)

  1. Date: 12/11/2010 1:33:00 PM
    I love the third line!!!!!!!!!!!! ; )

  1. Date: 12/11/2010 1:47:00 AM
    Very interesting to read, as swan prefers mild or cool climates and some swans only paddle with one leg, but still graceful to see afloat in water. (^_^) Noel.

  1. Date: 12/10/2010 5:23:00 AM
    Nice scene you have painted,Celene.Sweet piece for the contest.

  1. Date: 12/9/2010 9:58:00 AM
    Very beautiful description, Celene:) I love swans so much! Good luck in the contest! Hugs, Emilia:)

  1. Date: 12/9/2010 7:58:00 AM
    This is a wonderful description. Good luck in the contest. God Bless Phyl

  1. Date: 12/9/2010 7:17:00 AM
    Ah, the layout looks like swan feathers to me. Lovely touch, Celene! I responded to your Soup mail. Wasn't online late last night. Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 12/9/2010 6:13:00 AM
    SOUP MAIL..Celene..luv..

  1. Date: 12/8/2010 10:38:00 PM
    dear Car. .i made up my mind to enter contest,maybe i should. .but have to check if entry is open :)

  1. Date: 12/8/2010 6:23:00 PM
    This is such a soft serene poem dear poet, it "pirouettes" from the page right (write) into mine mind ! Great poetry ! much love, james

  1. Date: 12/8/2010 5:11:00 PM
    Well this is beautiful Celene and I picture Constance in this line as she is a dancer as well as a poet.. she will totally luv as I do the exquisite beauty of this entry ..good luck my dear friend.. with luv..

  1. Date: 12/8/2010 4:52:00 PM
    Nice tributes and attributes to Constance, celene

  1. Date: 12/8/2010 1:59:00 PM
    Yes Car,I read she loves to dance ,she's spiritual,loves swans too. .I dnt think i'm entering contest though,i dnt know,dear,yet im happy i got inspired,hugs

  1. Date: 12/8/2010 1:53:00 PM
    I love this form , and your poetry as well...always Michael

  1. Date: 12/8/2010 1:23:00 PM
    Did you know Constance is a dancer, Celene? I hope she reads this monoku because it seems to describe her so well. Love, Carolyn