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Undying Flames

Ardent Paramour-fervescent secret affair-furnace of Passion

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  1. Date: 5/27/2011 12:40:00 PM

    Very nicely done. You make every word count.

  1. Date: 1/17/2011 11:22:00 PM

    Very well done my friend but all your work is that way your a poet of true skill keep posting your friend John

  1. Date: 12/21/2010 10:06:00 AM

    Smile ~ Again, "Everyone" wishes to be loved my dear but, "Love" has its rightful place amid the spectrums of such, "Endless Colours" yet, one "Must" find this golden furnace afore, the "Evermore;" seek & you shall find ~ Again, "My Love & Warmth to 'You Always' &, All You Love, 'Forever,'" John! ~ Smile, "Have A Very 'Blessed & Beautiful Christmas' Seasonal Day 'My Dear, Beautiful Tinkerbell,' Amid The Eternal Embers of, 'Beautiful Love;' Sweet Dreams;" Bye!:) ~

  1. Date: 12/21/2010 9:51:00 AM

    Smile ~ Very steamy; passionate; vibrantly torching flames of molten lava, flowing from the cresting mountains top amid, burning skies of brimstone & ashes spewing their echoings unto the highest of "The 'Wonderous Thrones, Watchful Eyes;' Standing Amid Such Amazement While As Beholding These 'Ardently Scorchful' Embers of A Desires 'Unquenchably Everlasting' Thirstings of, 'A Burnings Need to Be, Loved!?'" ~ ....Cont:)

  1. Date: 12/14/2010 12:42:00 PM

    SOUP MA;IL ...Celene

  1. Date: 12/11/2010 1:44:00 PM

    Slowly the flames of love enrage into a combusting inferno, sweated we are in loving clasp, hot delightful poetry Celene >> James :)

  1. Date: 12/9/2010 2:55:00 PM

    SOUP MAIL.. if it does not melt from this hot Monoku luv..haha..

  1. Date: 12/9/2010 8:01:00 AM

    Hard to believe you can describe a scene in one sentence. God Bless Phyl

  1. Date: 12/9/2010 6:38:00 AM

    This Monoku is spectacular my dear poet ! A little sump'n sump'n fer ya Corva: except for the word "Ardent" in your Monoku; trash the capital letters in the rest of the poem...there is no need for them, los palabras de fuego are more than enough to get this fantastic Monoku's point across to the reader ! (just my opinion. much love, james

  1. Date: 12/8/2010 5:13:00 PM

    WOW and WOW and then some Celene.. hot as a firecracker on the fourth of July my dear friend.. intensely passionate ..my kinda one liner luv.. good luck if u entered .. my friend.. luv..

  1. Date: 12/8/2010 11:28:00 AM

    so many beautiful words here to create an intriguing story, Celene-- sure do wish you entered this-- thanks for the fave sweetie :) speaking of, need to go back to my chocolates ;) see you--hugs-- nikko :)

  1. Date: 12/8/2010 11:05:00 AM

    Excellent, Celene! Hope you do enter the contest. You write so well on the theme of passion; some of us pale by comparison. Much love to you, Carolyn

  1. Date: 12/8/2010 10:49:00 AM

    Quite an intelectual thought you have penned Celene

  1. Date: 12/8/2010 9:17:00 AM

    Not for the contest. .but thanks Cönstance for being an inspiration. .Hugs Celene.