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Indian Adventure

My Indian friend named White-Cloud
Donned feathers of which he was proud
He danced round the fire
Which proved  his desire
To charm the surrounding great crowd.

It was time to make a collection
By selling his lady’s confection
The tourists were hasty 
To get something tasty
And were running in every direction.

Now White-Cloud tried to make order
To protect his son and his daughter
He told them to duck
And get into the truck
Took the money and head for the border.


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  1. Date: 4/27/2013 2:44:00 AM

    Susan , having a look in at one of your early poems and enjoyed the fun of it .btw, thnx for stopping by.!! Jag

  1. Date: 12/9/2012 2:04:00 PM

    I love this! I love the meter or the way it flows. It's almost like a song. Thanks for stopping by on my site and for your comments...Hugs, Holly

  1. Date: 7/1/2012 6:32:00 PM

    I went to an Indian festival in June - bery intresting poem here! Peace & Love Matthew Anish

  1. Date: 6/25/2012 9:36:00 PM

    hey, I don't know if I saw this before, but it is sure a cute story, Susan!!

  1. Date: 9/13/2011 8:16:00 PM

    Great verse Susan with a sense of humor. Smile :)

  1. Date: 9/4/2011 9:33:00 AM

    This is too cute. It made me smile. God Bless, JB

  1. Date: 4/20/2011 6:47:00 PM

    thankxx Susan for your sweet comments on my poetry luv.. wishing u a most blessed Easter luv..

  1. Date: 3/30/2011 7:23:00 AM

    Cool and clever write in Limerick form Susan.. an enjoyable read with wonderful rhyme my friend.. hope u have been well and very blessed luv..

  1. Date: 3/7/2011 7:20:00 PM

    Hi susan, just realised i have commented on your poem before, yes i'm getting old, but at least it has given me the chance to 7 it three times, Ha Ha!. Harry

  1. Date: 3/7/2011 7:13:00 PM

    Hi Susan, this is a wonderful limerick, glad i found this while browsing, Harry

  1. Date: 3/6/2011 4:31:00 PM

    Thank you 4 the kind comment babe Got the picture with the Indians leaving for the border:) Sent this one to Francine Once again you make my day A kiss from me if that's ok be careful though for men are weak will want through bedroom window sneak.... loves you .....Don

  1. Date: 1/23/2011 2:34:00 AM

    :) Love it. Take care & Keep writing. <3 Kaci Jo

  1. Date: 1/6/2011 7:06:00 PM

    Wow Susan where have i been, to miss this wonderful contest winner, glad i'm able to catch up at last and read some wonderful poems today. Harry

  1. Date: 1/6/2011 9:44:00 AM

    A very impressive trio of limericks that collectively tell a humorous story. I'm glad to see this won you some recognition in the contest.

  1. Date: 12/27/2010 5:16:00 PM

    Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s Indian Giver contest Susan. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 12/27/2010 6:49:00 AM

    Susan, many congratulations on your fine win in PD's contest. Have a wonderful 2011 >> James....:)

  1. Date: 12/27/2010 6:01:00 AM

    Hi. Congratulations on your deserved honour. Eamon

  1. Date: 12/26/2010 11:57:00 PM

    Susan, your entry was excellent. You had a great story going on here and you used great meter and rhyme. Congratulations. LUv, Andrea

  1. Date: 12/26/2010 5:13:00 PM

    Congrats Susan on your big win in PD's contest with this awesome entry my friend... enjoy with luv and a Happy New Year full of God's choicest blessings to u and yours..

  1. Date: 12/26/2010 10:36:00 AM

    My Indian friend named White-Cloud Donned feathers of which he was proud! unique effect here, Susan! Congratulations on a worthy poem's honored place. Agape, Moses

  1. Date: 12/26/2010 5:43:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win..Sara

  1. Date: 12/26/2010 5:32:00 AM

    Congratulations on this well deserved win in the contest of Susan, susan

  1. Date: 12/25/2010 11:19:00 PM

    SUSAN, CONGRATULATIONS I had so much fun reading every entry. Some where serious and awesome, hope you are enjoying your holidays,..p.d.

  1. Date: 12/22/2010 7:14:00 AM

    Wonderful as always, Susan. I enjoyed reading your poetry today.

  1. Date: 12/20/2010 12:25:00 PM

    Loved the rhyme in this one. Couldn't have heard the story any better, you've done such a wonderful job with your choice of words. All the best, Susan. Your friend in poetry, Maya K.

  1. Date: 12/20/2010 11:04:00 AM

    Wonderful Limerick, Susan! Idk if it's for a contest, but if it is, will definitely do well as it is well written with great humor! Thanks for reading my Monoku! Blessings, peace, joy and love, Audrey

  1. Date: 12/18/2010 12:13:00 PM

    oh! and all the best if for a contest.

  1. Date: 12/18/2010 12:11:00 PM

    many relavant points, also good humor Susan, in the spirit of life.

  1. Date: 12/16/2010 11:37:00 AM

    unique style i enjoyed it. tells a story.

  1. Date: 12/16/2010 5:02:00 AM

    LOL WOW, this is .... great to say the least, you have penned such a stylish thing that makes us think ... wishing you well in all that you do ... Ryland

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