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SandCastle of dreams

~Sand-Castle~

********relaxing medicine****

my dreams of the sand
underneath the ocean stars
sleeping with the wind


********the beast dreams*******

Mr. Sandman's bag
romantic, like pouring rain
seashore wedding beach


********the world is home******

Wishing well mirage
homeless with rich sandcastle
ocean wave  pillow


********it takes two***********

Heaven passion kiss
4 hands creating a mote
drawbridge of sea shells


*******hungry wings***********

first class bay front seat
seagulls land on top tower
essence of bird spill

*******colliding sandcastle******

adventure hot day
knocking the beauty of my moment
stinky little brother

.      ~Skat~







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  1. Date: 5/15/2013 10:56:00 AM

    A sweet picture of wonderful dream of childhood days adorned with golden words. Enjoyed a lot. Loved always, bl

  1. Date: 4/17/2013 9:48:00 AM

    This is an exquisite poem my dearest Skat! Soo love it & sooo enjoyed! Thank you so much for sharing! Have a blessed and grace-filled day! love much, Leonora

  1. Date: 12/7/2012 7:45:00 PM

    This is fantastic. I love the ocean and I enjoyed this! ~Mel

  1. Date: 6/18/2011 9:06:00 PM

    Interesting write!

  1. Date: 5/29/2011 4:21:00 AM

    i loved this!!!! no wonder you won

  1. Date: 1/20/2011 6:17:00 AM

    Hi SKAT! Enjoyed the reado of each of your Haikus! And thank you for your congrats on my Haiku-win. Have a great day!...Love, Gert

  1. Date: 1/17/2011 2:53:00 AM

    Skat, you are a superb haiku writer, I love all of these, so so beautiful, amazing images, you bring me sand and sea, waves and serenity.

  1. Date: 1/11/2011 10:52:00 AM

    Enjoyed this series of poems~I wanted to let you know I am very pleazzzed with my placement in your "Hot Air Balloon Contest" Yippy Skip~So glad you found it "A Keeper" Take care girl !!!!Much Love~Rick

  1. Date: 1/8/2011 10:53:00 AM

    a great group of thoughts and images!

  1. Date: 12/31/2010 6:01:00 PM

    Happy New year Skat...lovely short poems! Light & Love

  1. Date: 12/8/2010 8:58:00 AM

    Fantastic group of Haiku's and how do you think of so many when I sit and think about doing one. Awesome. God Bless Phyl

  1. Date: 12/7/2010 12:37:00 PM

    Nice group of Haiku's ~ Thank you for my win in your Halloween contest LOL~Cool !!!~God bless you!!!

  1. Date: 12/7/2010 12:10:00 PM

    Nice work. I really like the one about the seagulls. Good luck n the contest.

  1. Date: 12/6/2010 10:24:00 PM

    Skat, those last two were really creative and unique. Now I see why you wanted a sandcastle contest!!! Luv, Andrea

  1. Date: 12/6/2010 3:57:00 PM

    Fascinating and Fabulous and FANTABULOUS Irma my BFF forever.. this is awesome as always when u write and so wonderful with those headings above each Haiku... stupendous my friend.. again..so thankxxx for the 1st place win in your contest... made my day that much more better because of the win but mostly because of our friendship luv..

  1. Date: 12/6/2010 9:37:00 AM

    Hi. Honoured to receive such a great result in your contest, honoured and absolutely delighted. Loved the above , what I aim for. Thanking you, Eamon

  1. Date: 12/6/2010 9:15:00 AM

    Good Morning Skat, This is wonderful and it touches my heart. Thank you for letting me enter your contest, win or lose I loved the experience. Fun don't ya know Having such fun with you and all the soup poets! As Always, Shar

  1. Date: 12/6/2010 8:18:00 AM

    Nice thoughts, very meaning and innovative haiku with apt images, Skat.

  1. Date: 12/6/2010 8:11:00 AM

    Thank you for the big smile this morning over here in chilly NY... You would have won your own contest with this one.lol thanks for the high placement in contest, it wa a fun write and a very good contest....luv Michael

  1. Date: 12/6/2010 3:17:00 AM

    Interesting ones that you have come up with..Sorry that I did not put SandCastle in the title..I added it but you had already judged the contest..Thanks for chosing mine from among all the entries to place in the contest..Now Peligans would wipe out the whole day..Sara

  1. Date: 12/5/2010 10:12:00 PM

    yes love the way that stinky brother ruined your sandcastle,,lol,, but the seagull droppings is funnier,, ha ha! p.d.

  1. Date: 12/5/2010 9:56:00 PM

    You could have been another winner with this gem for your contest:).I love each one of your haiku,the one of your stinky little brother made me smile,hope its fiction,lol!i loved 'the mirage'one skat. .Have a great week dear friend and keep your pen flowing.

  1. Date: 12/5/2010 7:36:00 PM

    oh this was so much fun to read, Irma :) and how cool that you also have Sandman in yours but yours is a romantic one, mine's a sleepyhead-LOL! & I enjoyed so much that last haiku-- haha stinky little brother ;)--I liked the medicine one too-- mmmmmm ocean breeze, lovely! well wish you the best in judging-- so much fun writing for this-- looking fwd to your winners :) hugs! nikko :)

  1. Date: 12/5/2010 5:42:00 PM

    LOL, I'm in the middle of judging my contest. So far so good. Thought I'd have some Haiku fun my self guys and gals. Boy are they fun, getting better and speedy with them. I should announce the winners in just a few.. good luck to all*LUV~SKAT