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Consciousness

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Consciousness

Let's not confuse 
Variance between
The character traits
Of all human beings

Affectionate are some
While others aloof
Some truly selfless 
Receptive to truth

Few are humble
Ambitious and kind
Cheerful and pleasant
Of spirit and mind

Fewer are those
Giving, devoted
These rare traits 
Are often demoted

Existing are those
Lacking in faith
Relenting, constricting
Awaiting their fate

Combative and hostile
Callous and cruel
Disastrous to many
Anger they fuel

Unfinished*

~Camille Rose Castillo 2010


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