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Being Productive

 
Most of life, 
I thought being busy 
is not the same 
as being hectic,
and the question 
and answer remain

Then, I thought, 
how does 
being productive fit in?

Choosing productive 
made sense
Yet, who is my judge,
that was time to look up,
look for an angel
to judge from Heaven
I never found one
which strangely
declared me confused,
my first judgement
so arrived

But, when one is hectic,
one is busy,
quite a merry-go-round,
a never ending whirl

Whoops, I know my answer,
I'll look at the blue sky,
Wave at some bird,
Smell some flowers,
and
do absolutely
nothing at all

Now, I feel productive!

 

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  1. Date: 12/4/2010 2:36:00 PM

    wow! Lou, well just a week ago, my so called friend used them words on me when. To stop being lazy and be productive. Unlike you I have not hit productive just yet.. enjoyed your the thoughts you found, here,,. have a nice day,..miss p.d.