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Good Bye Dark Angel

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Good Bye Dark Angel

Do you not see that I am still standing here
How long do you think I will wait
Patience is my strongest suit
But it seems you are taking
More of it than I have
I am trying to make this work
How is it I have quit you 
But each time I do so
You come back
Begging 
PLEADING
For one more chance
ONE MORE CHANCE
How many “One more chances”
Can a girl give without 
Bleeding dry from all the wounds 
You’ve caused
Is this just a game you play
I have convinced myself it is 
But If you want the truth
My heart can no longer take the abuse
But I feel my soul would die without you
In this sad creation I have made around you
I told you in the beginning 
That I was fragile and broken
That my feelings were hard to express to others
But somehow you opened me
Healed me
Loved me
And
Left me
So this is for you
From me
Saying good bye
I know I will recover
And survive
And one day 
Remember 
That you were the one 
Who saved me from myself
So thank you
But I can no longer go on
Torturing myself
It is time to find a love
That will make me whole
Good bye Dark Angel
Good bye 

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  1. Date: 12/3/2010 12:44:00 AM
    So sad a write, but the many positives interweaved within lighten its weight some. It is good that you have forgiven to move on, thus not torturing yourself more. Some people are in our lives for short time loan to teach us to move on to betteer newer pastures. You will find that person who will complete you when time is right... Nicely balanced piece...