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Feelings Rise

Feelings rise
 No compromise
Waiting to surmise 
 The look in his eyes
Finally to realize
 The time has come
It has just begun
 To see what shall become

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  1. Date: 12/2/2010 11:49:00 AM

    I wish that I could vivify my comments to you and to all better. But I end up babbling and making no sense. So, I will leave you a message today letting you know I did read your poetry and I enjoyed it. I love reading poetry and the poets here are so talented. Have a wonderful day Jodie. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 12/2/2010 5:05:00 AM

    Very flowing words with equally nice rhynming on feelings, Jodie