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Charles Melody Lightning Ink - Premium Member

Written by: Charles Melody Lightning Ink

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LIGHTENING GREEN

Brightening captivating greenish allure
Seasonal visitor like rain drops...
Leaving me always wanting some more...
Like Oliver Twist.

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Phyllis Babcock Date: 12/4/2010 8:19:00 AM A cute write and you made me smile. Your writing is now getting witty. Good for you. Love mom
Andrea Dietrich Date: 12/1/2010 10:22:00 PM by the way, that is a clever little "twist" you put at the end of this poem! Luv, Andrea
Andrea Dietrich Date: 12/1/2010 10:18:00 PM soupmail, Charles
Carolyn Devonshire Date: 12/1/2010 11:41:00 AM Oh, such a delightful poem, son. Remember what happened when Oliver asked for more? I can see the vibrant green plants bringing joy to your heart in this poem. Beautifully written, dear. Love, "mom"
Doris Culverhouse Date: 11/30/2010 4:32:00 AM Hey my friend, how are you? Hope you can write as much as you want. does the village have wireless internet? Do you teach the children? hope to talk soon.
Celene Crescent Date: 11/30/2010 2:16:00 AM Who didn't love Oliver Twist?thanks for the memory,lovely poem!
Andrea Dietrich Date: 11/29/2010 9:13:00 PM Hey, Charles. this is a fun little poem, comparing yourself to Oliver Twist. Sounds mystical! Luv, Andrea
Linda-Marie SweetHeart Date: 11/29/2010 8:10:00 PM Yes a classic Lightening Ink as Oliver Twist is.. wonderful and brilliant bright lines of your Senryu ..enjoyed tonight with luv..my friend..
john loving iii Date: 11/29/2010 2:28:00 PM good. jhl
Poet Destroyer A Date: 11/29/2010 10:31:00 AM Always, leaving me wanting more,,, lol,, I know some one who loves that line,, but he says,, more dots more dots.. Twist, weee.. sorry about that weee.. I love Oliver twist, by the way. OI' and I enjoyed this little write,.always your friend,..p.d.