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Interim

This fertile womb lies still in wait.
Void of motion, sound and love;
A lonesome space of plaster and brick.
Worn carpets and marked walls
That surround this shell,
Are signs of seed now grown and gone.
This cell has served a family well.
More fruit within this void shall swell.

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  1. Date: 12/14/2010 7:38:00 PM

    Hi Ray, this is a very interesting poem, eally enjoyed. Harry

  1. Date: 12/12/2010 7:51:00 AM

    Another view of your work that says it all....in just a few short lines, I can grasp the emptiness of the rooms, and yet the memories that linger in each wall. What a wonderful entry.......so glad I found this one! :)

  1. Date: 11/30/2010 4:43:00 PM

    If for the contest, should be in winners' circle for it is very creative in its content and presentation..I am glad that I chose this one to read today..Sara

  1. Date: 11/27/2010 9:58:00 PM

    interesting, very cool write Ray,'take care *luv~SKAT