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Wilma Neels
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Pathway to forgiveness
look up in the sky a lone star illuminates... love and mercy
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Doris Culverhouse
Date: 12/17/2010 4:21:00 PM
congrats ton the win!! Merry Christmas!!
Sara Kendrick
Date: 12/13/2010 3:16:00 PM
Great topic chosen..Congrats..Sara
Carol Sunshine Brown
Date: 12/6/2010 12:32:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in Andrea's contest "Haiku Me A Christmas Tree" Wilma. Love, Carol
Dzana Madagu
Date: 12/6/2010 7:29:00 AM
Wilma, this is an amazing piece you've got. The three lines carry enough weight on their own. The 'lone Star' was a sign for the Wise Men, to guide them to the location of the King of Kings and the Saviour of the World- Jesus, when He was born. His coming to earth has brought Joy and Hope to a gloomy world. He is love and mercy personified. Do you know how powerful this Haiku piece is?? Am I right in thinking that this poem won a competition?
S. K. A. T.
Date: 12/5/2010 6:37:00 PM
Congrats! On your win! Enjoyed the moment of reading your poetry.LUV~SKAT
Hitendra Mehta
Date: 12/5/2010 11:12:00 AM
Many congrats Wilma on picking up coveted spot in the winners list with this beautiful entry in Andrea's contest. Luv/best wishes........Hitendra Mehta
Annalise Brigham
Date: 12/5/2010 10:21:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in the contest, Wilma!! Beautiful image! Love, Audrey
Linda-Marie SweetHeart
Date: 12/5/2010 8:06:00 AM
Congrats dear Wilma friend on your super win in Andrea's cool contest with this excellent and expressive entry .. enjoy another sweet victory with luv.. and super thankxx for some heat... oh ...
nette onclaud
Date: 12/5/2010 6:38:00 AM
wonderfu; 'ku.. cheers and thanks for your wishes, wilma!! nette
Dr.Ram Mehta
Date: 12/5/2010 5:28:00 AM
Congratulations on this well deserved win in the contest of Andrea, Wilma
Michael J. Falotico
Date: 12/5/2010 5:03:00 AM
One of my favs from the day you wrote it.. congrats on your success my love....Lu Michael
Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 12/4/2010 9:36:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Wilma. I love this one -- quite an image.
Andrea Dietrich
Date: 12/4/2010 5:00:00 PM
congratulations, WIlma, one of the most reverent messages in the contest!
Stephen Petluk gentle fury
Date: 11/30/2010 9:20:00 PM
I love this! Forgiveness is no small challenge!
Charles Melody Lightning Ink
Date: 11/29/2010 1:23:00 AM
Any man who forgiveness has failed to govern, is a sadist. great way to convince the hard minded man.
Sheri Fresonke Harper
Date: 11/28/2010 9:33:00 PM
Lovely thought at the end, good choice with illuminates:)
Andrea Dietrich
Date: 11/28/2010 1:04:00 AM
Nice message, Wilma. (illuminates) I never look at my contest entries till last minute but I am guessing this might be for my contest? If so, thanks for your support. And I'm glad you enjoyed my newest poem. LUv, andrea
FABIYAS M V
Date: 11/27/2010 10:01:00 PM
Love and mercy........great feelings,Wilma.Sweet write.
Annalise Brigham
Date: 11/26/2010 7:37:00 PM
The Morning Star! Ever bright! Wonderful Haiku about love and mercy and from whom they flow! Much love, Audrey
Joyce Johnson
Date: 11/26/2010 7:14:00 PM
Very nice Wilma. I expect that star will be growing brighter every night.Thank you for reading and commenting on my haiku. Lov, Joyce
duncan ceizar chappell
Date: 11/26/2010 5:59:00 PM
nice my freind
Linda-Marie SweetHeart
Date: 11/26/2010 4:42:00 PM
Especially at this time of year dear Wilma.. time for forgiveness and for looking up to Heaven and the one STAR that shines brightest luv.. a wonderful Haiku my friend.. happy weekend..
Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/26/2010 4:23:00 PM
Great one.. I am so glad that Love and Mercy found me..Enjoyed reading your work..Sara
binibining P.iNk
Date: 11/26/2010 4:21:00 PM
This sure is very inspiring and I love how you make this as a beautiful reminder to all who read it :) hope your weekend's gonna be good-- or haha that you would be good ;) -- see you missy :) I'm gonna be hiding in a bit :) --hugs nikko :)
SYLVIA Coulstock
Date: 11/26/2010 12:56:00 PM
Dear Wilma.A very illuminating Haiku.And you cannot have mercy without love.We can shine here on earth by projecting these truths in our lives.I love your title,just those three words have captured me.They speak volumes as does the rest of this profound piece.I am so glad you liked my 'One for All'I am so grateful I was able to share it with you.Thank you so much.Love June (S)
Dr.Ram Mehta
Date: 11/26/2010 12:50:00 PM
Devotional write with good faith, Wilma
john loving iii
Date: 11/26/2010 12:46:00 PM
His love and mercy. 5
Kevin Semeniuk
Date: 11/26/2010 11:44:00 AM
beautiful image!
Diane Locksley
Date: 11/26/2010 11:30:00 AM
A remarkable, striking image and a testament to your kind and loving heart, Wilma. Good luck in the contest!
Michael J. Falotico
Date: 11/26/2010 11:22:00 AM
If you did enter it , congrats its a winner just like the poet....love Michael
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