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Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 12/13/2010 11:03:00 AM Congratulations on your win Nette in Deborah Guzzi's contest. Love, Carol
Sara Kendrick Date: 12/9/2010 2:50:00 PM Congratulations on your win..Sara
Darrin Funk Date: 12/9/2010 8:59:00 AM OK... I was in a bad mood and was, perhaps, a little harsh in my previous critique. Enjoy the win. I have deleted the comment.
Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 12/9/2010 3:57:00 AM Congratulations on this well deserved first place win, nette
Andrew Crisci Date: 12/8/2010 10:41:00 PM Big Congratulations on your top spot, Nette. Your work is of highest caliber. Enjoy your victory and be always proud of your achievement. God bless you. I wish success in your future writing endeavors. Thanks for your kind comments on my poetry. Peace and Love, Andrew.
nette onclaud Date: 12/8/2010 9:14:00 PM congrats on the win, darrin.. i'm sorry but all artists have their unique styles which we may like or not ... and i respect yours.. nette
Tahera Mannan Date: 12/8/2010 8:09:00 PM The images are superb. I don't agree with Mr. Funk. I love this poem. many congratulations for this top notch.
nette onclaud Date: 12/8/2010 5:53:00 PM thanks, dear soupie friends for enjoying this one.. i am both humbled and thrilled! may we keep the pen overflowing with life's beauty... nette
Linda-Marie SweetHeart Date: 12/8/2010 5:53:00 PM Way to go Nette my friend on your first place win in Debbie's contest with this excellent entry so exquisitely written... enjoy your top spot luv..
Barbara Gorelick Date: 12/8/2010 3:33:00 PM Nette, I am so happy for you..this form just killed me..yours read like a dream..congrts. BG
Carrie Richards Date: 12/8/2010 2:39:00 PM You are a breath of fresh air.....what a joy to read this winning poem!! :) Congratulations Nette!!
Constance La France Date: 12/8/2010 2:35:00 PM Congratulations on first place in Deb's contest with this wonderful Sestina~
Carolyn Devonshire Date: 12/8/2010 2:25:00 PM Told you she would love this! Congratulations on taking first place, Nette! Love, Carolyn
Debbie Guzzi Date: 12/8/2010 2:00:00 PM Well look who's #1 why YOU...intense, joyful, profound write, keep up the GREAT work :p Light & Love
Debbie Guzzi Date: 12/6/2010 9:53:00 AM Such a charming verse, I request you capitalize "I" and the beginnings of sentences since you are putting periods at the end. Also, in verse 7 please use ascending & light in the body of line 1, eyes & orange in the body of line 2, enter and soft in the last line (everyone has been requested to do the same last 3 line layouts, though I know this is not the only way to do it.) And please do not put the words at the END of the last three lines. You should place well with these corrections ;) Love
Charlotte Puddifoot Date: 11/26/2010 2:04:00 AM beautiful, amazing imagery in this poem...
harry horsman Date: 11/25/2010 4:30:00 PM awesome and so profound, this is a joy to read Nette. Harry
Poet Destroyer A Date: 11/24/2010 11:19:00 PM The gliding between the different worlds is awesome,, Nette, Enjoyed your poem, and have a wonderful blessed Thanksgiving day,. always,..Miss P.D.
John Rhinem Date: 11/24/2010 5:10:00 PM Smile ~ "A Fave Amid The Faves, Beyond A Doubt; 'Brilliant Bright!!!'" ~ "My Love & Warmth to 'You Always' &, All You Love," John! ~ Smile, "Have A Very 'Blessed & Beautiful' Holiday 'My Dear, Precious Nette Onclaud,' Amid The Constellations of, 'Beautiful Love;'" Bye!:) ~
Annalise Brigham Date: 11/24/2010 5:07:00 PM A real breath of fresh air, Nette!! "........fairies ascending in bulbs collecting a splendor of unison with God's light..." beautiful images so well laid out with perfect flow! Wishing you the best of luck in Deb's Contest! This is Joy!!
John Rhinem Date: 11/24/2010 5:05:00 PM Smile!!! ~ "Your Beauty" is most assuredly one of the fascinating lights amid poetics gifted verse; an astonishing rare jewel "You Are" although, I see above & beyond All splendours brushed upon this magnificent canvas, "My Beautiful Father of Light" whom, "Created It All!!!" ~ So, "Thank You," for blessing my joyous soul with this gift thus given, "Your Spectacular Pen; 'Beautiful' Nette" &, what words can one utter except, whatever "Your Treasures" do, "Never," lay down this brush ~ ....Cont:)
Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 11/24/2010 3:53:00 PM Very wonderful and perfect Sestina for deb's contest. You have chosen a very interesting theme of Yoga, nette. I also do Yoga everyday
Michael J. Falotico Date: 11/24/2010 2:59:00 PM Beautiful words , expressions and feelings pour like good wine form your pen...love it..always Michael
Linda-Marie SweetHeart Date: 11/24/2010 12:38:00 PM Such an excellent Sestina Nette my friend. .. a perfect expression for the contest theme ..luv.. good luck.. u nailed this form very well.. and ended with a wonderful tercet .. good luck in Debbie's contest luv.. enjoy a happy holiday with lots of luv..
Carolyn Devonshire Date: 11/24/2010 11:19:00 AM Oh, to see the universe through your descriptive, creative words is a joy, Nette! Amazing imagery that makes me wish we could see all of these things firsthand together. Obviously, you find great happiness in your yoga. Deb will love this one as much as I do. Best wishes in the contest! Love, Carolyn
Sara Kendrick Date: 11/24/2010 4:48:00 AM Good luck in the contest with this well constructed, descriptive and expressive work..I was delighted that you saw the similiarities between the coke spewing and fog..Sara
Adeleke Adeite Date: 11/24/2010 4:27:00 AM Wishing you all the best in the contest friend. hope to know you and thanks for your comments. Love always.Adeleke