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A Conspiracy of Crows

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A Conspiracy of Crows

Awake
Silent morning
where mists crochet patterns
upon a sky-cloud reverie
Wheeling birds bring nets tight around themselves
Chatterbox crows with blue-black wings
fuss, sinking back to wires
bringing the day
awake

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  1. Date: 11/20/2010 6:32:00 PM
    wow strong piece here my friend thank you

  1. Date: 11/20/2010 9:54:00 AM
    Thank you, JimmyJ for your helpful comments. I appreciate helpful, but kindly offered comments.

  1. Date: 11/20/2010 9:08:00 AM
    like this piece my friend thank you for sharing

  1. Date: 11/20/2010 1:31:00 AM
    Very nice ,Sherry. Only thing is that the 'silent' morning doesn't quite agree with the 'chatterbox crows'. Maybe 'Awake Shrouded morning....' The ideas are good and I think that a little tinkering would improve the sombre yet hopeful emotions contained within. Anyway, I hope this little review is of some help. Enjoyed the read. jimmyj