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Taken

My heart has many
Holes that can't be repaired
People try to patch the womb
But they never stay their

My trust is broken
In a million peises
And nobody is there
Nobody but Jesus

My love has been taken
Right out of my hands 
Now i cant do what
I have planned

My soulhas left
Me dieing in the grass
But mabyi can
Be happy at last.

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  1. Date: 11/24/2010 10:26:00 AM
    Please continue to share your poetry with us here at PoetrySoup. Wishing you and yours a wonderful Thanksgiving Ja'Chel. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 11/22/2010 10:30:00 AM
    I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Ja"Chel. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. You can look to the left side of the main page and find lots of information on PoetrySoup including contests by members of PoetrySoup and contests by the PoetrySoup site also which you as a new member and us oldies also may enter. If you have questions please feel free to ask ANYONE here. We are ALL willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 11/19/2010 10:45:00 AM
    This is beautiful and sad and wonderful!

  1. Date: 11/19/2010 10:28:00 AM
    You have a few typos: "Their" (There), "Peises" (Pieces), "Dieing" (Dying), & "Mabyi" (Maybe). That being said, I hear this sad message in this poem. Happiness comes from within, thus everything else will shine no matter how dark it gets. Excellent piece!