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The Boating at Chettuva

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The Boating at Chettuva

Aesthetics opened its eyes on wavelets;
Our boat moved on to ecstasies.
The twittering green mangroves
Peep through the creatures, the Hanging Sword under.
Moved on :the zephyr is teaching flora the nautch,
And the sky putting on saffron a saree.
The oyster collectors;the mud taking coolies;
And the canoes with nets : all fish life.
Just one line I am enjoying
From the verse with a thousand green lines,
Naturally rhymed ; and its title,
“God’s Own Country”, is quite mirroring.

The boat returns to the bank of memories,
And strands on the canvas of the mind.

FABIYAS M V

(Chettuva  - a beautiful place in Kerala,India.
Nautch       -an Indian dance.
Saree         -a traditional dress worn by Indian women.
Kerala is known as ‘God’s own country’ in tourist map.)
 

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  1. Date: 11/7/2011 1:33:00 PM
    Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s "Holiday Poem"contest Fabiyas. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 11/5/2011 10:05:00 PM
    HELLO FAB ONCE AGAIN ;-) CONGRATULATIONS, thank you for supporting my contest... I'm just dropping by to give everyone a warm congratulations and gratitude from the heart. ((you may get this comment more than once, if you entered more than one of my contest this week)) Have a wonderful weekend, GOD BLESS,..p.d.

  1. Date: 11/5/2011 5:37:00 PM
    Congrats Fabiyas on another wonderful win with this outstanding holiday poetry my friend..luv..

  1. Date: 11/5/2011 9:54:00 AM
    Congrats, Fab. Excellent piece. Nice going. Kudos. Best to you and yours. Ralph

  1. Date: 10/13/2011 10:10:00 PM
    Congrats. on your special winning poem.Fabiyas. Hugs, Vie

  1. Date: 10/13/2011 6:05:00 PM
    Congrats Fabiyas on a well deserved win with this electrifying entry .. amazing lines of visual imagery and great insight my friend..luv..

  1. Date: 10/13/2011 4:41:00 PM
    Well written Fabiyas. Congratulations on your win in Frank's contest

  1. Date: 10/13/2011 3:21:00 PM
    Congratulations on your poetry placing in Frank's "One Stand Out Day" contest Fabiyas. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 11/21/2010 5:59:00 PM
    wonderful! it usually only took one line too to blow my mind. thanks for stopping by :D

  1. Date: 11/19/2010 5:46:00 PM
    So enjoyed your creative write tonight FABIYAS and the tempting way u described everything luv.. happy weekend with luv.. awesome piece..

  1. Date: 11/19/2010 3:57:00 AM
    this is a brilliant work of real art

  1. Date: 11/18/2010 8:51:00 PM
    great verse babe... kokoda comments all good too... might get a bit of rain to settle down my tortured brain perhaps a drought is due......Don

  1. Date: 11/18/2010 8:20:00 PM
    What a beautiful picture of Chettuva you have painted. I have been ther once. I totally agree with you.

  1. Date: 11/18/2010 1:04:00 PM
    yes, I can still feel the thrillsn of the god's own country i visited as early 1994. fabiyas

  1. Date: 11/18/2010 9:09:00 AM
    fabiyas, i love saris... being asain like you, i wear them a lot! your poem is so eloquent that can be re-read for its utter beuaty.. thanks for coming by my thread; much appreciated! if you want some laughs, i have a new one..:) namaste! warmest, nette

  1. Date: 11/18/2010 8:59:00 AM
    I enjoyed taking a short trip in India through your poetic eyes....The comput'r mouse died and I cried the batteries brought him back alive...Thanks for reading..Sara

  1. Date: 11/18/2010 8:08:00 AM
    Hello Fabiyas, This captivated me and I am happy to have read your explanation of Nautch-Kerala etc. It is lovely and I much enjoyed reading this one this morning. As Always, Shar